Dark Poetry #2 |
An Emptiness To Fill |
MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
An Emptiness To Fill I go to the darkness of night missing you I dream of the empty I feel. Upon the morn and the light coming through I play back my thoughts that are sealed. Forever in mind, to be kept, treasured in the box of my heart, locked and keyed Only released when sighing is stirred by the voicing I hear in the breeze. Its raining they say, somewhere way up high but outside it's a sunshining day. As I peek out I see no clouds in the sky just the bluest of blue, as they say. Will get dressed, force myself step through to the out and leave my inside behind with cam in my hand and a walk in my heart I will search for new treasure to find. Will bring my thoughts back and my pictures to share as I look, exchange empty with full And am hoping for feelings to rise, once again to replace exciting for dull. M * found my Lady Baltimore Hibiscus blooming this morning *s |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Moonchild...Such beautiful pictures you paint with your words. Enjoyed the hibiscus..I only grow weeds. But even there, there is beauty I suppose. At least they are green. Lovely poem. Hardrock |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
you made me smile...I do not know what I would have done with out my digital camera to inspire me so...and of course my gardens and words of other poets thank you Hardock..somewhere in those weeds is life..and a seed of beauty... ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Beautiful picture! |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
it's a most beautiful flower... huge blossoms... one a day then they die... almost like my words... ~~soft thanks Maureen |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Possessions die but memories dont and I doubt I will forget this poem...Stunning~ |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Christopher I believe the last response was for you and Beth such a beautiful thought, thank you ~~soft smiles Maureen (if I get a sunny day tomorrow I will add on the bottom here the Lord Balto. it just began opening up today..deep deep reds *s always a step behind the woman |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Beautiful picture. both the flower and the poem. be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Kethry Many thanks your comments are often my days'highlights ~~softly Maureen |
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jerralynne Junior Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 11 |
"I go to the darkness / of night missing you/I dream of the empty I feel. / Upon the morn /and the light coming through / I play back my thoughts that are sealed." your very first words engaged me & left me almost breathless ~ such truth! ~ thank you ~ this was absolutely beautiful ~ jerralynne |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
Maureen So beautiful... the grace of nature can be such an inspiration and upliftment to those who desperately need it... if only we'd let it. Thanks for sharing. Sylvia |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
jerralynne..thank you for such nice words..and welcome, I see you are new here..I haven't been here a month yet..but I can tell you, you will love it here... ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
you are quite welcome, Sylvia ~~soft thanks Maureen |
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