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Alchemy |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Alchemy She sings All night long A longing song But nobody hears The tune of her tears She sings for seduction For the final reduction For the source of existence The death of resistance For annihilation of Me And destruction of We For the end of reason For the garden of Eden She longs to be Both Adam and Eve |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Uta, I like this one it works. Be well Kethry< !signature--> "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, another beauty from Uta. Love this. Catalinamoon |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
But nobody hears, the tune of her tears....Lotharingia, this one touches me in a certain way, again, your work is so good!! Loved this! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Uta,...although I've been in school for oh say,...20 years of my 24 year life,...I have to admit that I durr...had to look up the title word before I began to read. K,...laugh now. hehee. Anyway,...I learned something new. Thanks.  . This poem is another 'beaut'. "The death of resistance",....mmmhhmm, that line says sooo much to me. Super. Take care. *Peace. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
lotharingia, a great piece. very magical my friend. "To the centre of the city where all roads meet, waiting for you,To the depths of the ocean where all hopes sank, searching for you," Joy divison |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I loved the thought in this...she longs to be both Adam and Eve...completion, the balance of active and receptive principles---simply portrayed and very well done. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Uta..Another beautiful piece. Such depth in so few words. The beginning is so sad...and the ending is so perfect. Hardrock |
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