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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon 
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Breathless A kick in the gut blind side image leaving him hurting and wanting To inspire the fire and wide eyed glance That beautiful face lost in the heat of a sensual moment Continual denial of himself Easier to cry No waves, no fear Shifting his mind to other things The car needs new tires... 7/23/00 Gary Pence "Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is fantastic! What a slice of emotion! Very well done!  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Reminescince with a vengance. Well done! Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Jona, Nice Job!! How I can relate to letting my mind "jump" to other thoughts when I am in the middle of something emotional. Loved your poem!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Jonas, I like this a lot. Glad I found it on the back page. Note to all: I think we often miss some real gems because they drop down so fast. My new plan is to go back 3-5 pages whenever I can. catalinamoon |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thank you for reading everyone! This one was a little different for me. More of my experimentation. |
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