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Dark Poetry #2

Simplicity

Nikolette Sadness

Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 337
port richey fl.

0 posted 2000-08-07 12:04 PM

most of my friends say this one is their favorite.

~Simplicity~

living, dying.
breathing, sighing.
frown, smile.
belief, denile.
love, hate.
destroy, create.
laugh,cry.
dont let it die.
live and love
and stand above
the sin of hate.
who first create
the sound of tears
the silence of fears.
dying laughs,
living cries.
love and hate,
hiding lies.

Nikolette Sadness

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i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

[This message has been edited by Nikolette Sadness (edited 08-07-2000).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-08-07 12:21 PM

I liked this Nikolette, the way you juxtaposed the opposites, with the resulting emotion beneath...very effective!

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2000-08-07 12:59 PM

Hi Nikolette,

This is wonderful, I do very much love the simplicity, I just can't seem to keep anything simple, very much enjoyed.

Love, Cerenity

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

3 posted 2000-08-07 04:34 AM

I agree. Beautifully stated!

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo

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