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for my lover |
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jerralynne Junior Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 11 |
smile & chuckle say i am too funny laugh about this later on i am just a woman who longs to feel your gaze who yearns for your touch but so you have no doubts where i am concerned no qualms about me i shall confess my rambling reveries this imperfect woman in your bed somehow in all your seductive charms in your quiet intensity in those eyes which see through me from which i cannot hide you encircle me & in this exposure i feel completely secure when i am with you enveloped i feel safe safe enough to let it all go to let go to open up to be completely vulnerable to you this never happens i never let it happen and it is exactly what i need and it is exactly what i want being with you being awakened & aroused bringing tears & cries of pleasure this most incredibly intense experience i never want it to end i do not even want to close my eyes to do so would be to not see you and you would seem just that much farther away and i cannot feel close enough to you bodies entwined pulling & pushing tumultuous & ravenous & frenzied you cannot be close enough electrifying & overwhelming moments of all-consuming passion naked all-revealing i want to be with you eyes open for here you are this mysterious magnetic man so much depth in your eyes so much depth inside so much i do not know & i am wise enough there is more than this the physical is not the best of me as i know it is not the best of you so even though i am so scared to step outside some unspoken boundary i am intrigued i want to know you but i cannot know you in one night or weeks of nights or even more every thing takes time one day one night at a time life is long youth is young & we must live our lives without restrictions daring to dream daring to reach our own goals daring to live so not ever taking anything away from you not fearing you would take anything away from me just to have the time the space the opportunity to see you by the light of day outside of the shadows of night to see what you will show of yourself to see you in your entirety to show you i am more than just a woman who longs to feel your gaze who yearns for your touch imperfect as we may be delighted & delirious in bed to see each other eyes open |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
You did such an awesome job here of expressing a whole mixture of feelings!! I read this twice, and found myself in so many verses. Just excellent!!!!!! Do we dare explore more of ourselves and the other person..Wanting to go far beyond lovers..So much said here!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, new love. Beautiful writing of the feeling we have all known. (all the women anyway) Made me think of a shor term lover from years ago, and someone I love now as well. Thats a darn good poem that can take my mind to 2 different places. Loved it. And welcome to DP Catalinamoon |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Welcome to DP. pretty spectacular for a first post.This poem pulled me in lots of different directions at once. Hope to see more of your work. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
This is a masterpeice! The emotions in this poem so compleatly mirror my own experiances! This poem touched me in a way that few do. Wonderful job! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
This was absolutly one of the best pieces of emotion I have read. It is like you had reach inside of me and new what I was feeling. Your out poor of true emotions is astonishing. -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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