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Lying to you |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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I don’t love you, This is just a game, I toyed with your heart So I could gain some fame, Caring for your needs is not what I plan to do, Using you till the last ounce is what I should do, You ask yourself if you believe this to be true, Wake up and listen to the message all around you, So simple was it to capture your heart, Now shall I crush it with a mighty blow, You deny these claims that I have made, You are a fool to think that I really cared, Spare yourself this misery and pain, Leave before I change my thoughts, For thoughts of mine now the devil has bought. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
That sounds just like several people I have know speaking. Hmmm. Got me thinking ... Great work! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
these little games make us feel powerful..but leave us empty...this is a very strong poem...i feel the words...great job |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
When it is a game..there is no winner, very strong words, such a tragedy that it is a part of life. Great poem!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Aaaahh,blind adoration where would we be without it. Nice poem Keth Kethry. When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole. |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Tsk tsk ... the cruelty of the dating game ... I think u have captured it very aptly. ~verve |
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