Dark Poetry #2 |
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Giant's Leap |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
GIANT'S LEAP: Once more your face appears As I struggle to focus through my tears All I want to do is cry Confusion mixed with fear In this time I so need you near I don't understand why You promised to always care No matter what you'd always be there Where are you now? And so I must repair Shattered, stripped, my heart is bare The pain you allowed Your love and strength no more known In fear I stand here alone Alone before a giant's leap The heart you were meant to keep. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Sgreybe, I feel the loss and sadness while reading this. Ive tried looking through that blur of tears too..A well written verse!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Sylvia..This is beautiful. Stick with us...we'll give you wings to fly across that yawning chasm of sadness. Hardrock |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
once again, you have created an exceptional piece of work here. what an edge to stand on. well done. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sylvia, this again shows the pain so clearly. Reminds me of a song where the woman asks the man "Does she know how you told me you'd hold me till you died-But you're still alive" Not fair. Good luck, maybe things will turn. Dreams are eternal. Cat.. |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
So sad this piece. The pain leaked through. Makes for a good poem though.Hang in there. Keth. Kethry. When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole. |
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