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Street Star ( repost from dark #1 archives) |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida 
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girl you got some gold by the way, can i get a benjamin? I saw a new soul down on the corner round up the street lookin like dey tryin to get chose but on the real, how 'bout you and me? I can show ya bettah than I can tell ya, baby game's sold not told I'll teach ya everything I need to learn but damn girl you fine when you look mad are those marks on your face? quiet type wit da mean look, huh? so you already knocked down the door of the hard school time for you to graduate i can make you a star the way those hips undulatin... ...and off she went. Never looked back. Diploma in hand, World in her pocket. Or is it a mattress on her back? Don't bother to show her the err Of her ways, She only hears "I'm about to get paid!!" *****kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
oh you have to email me about this one and tell me the story. This is remarkable!!!! I want to know more!!! [email protected] isn't that brave? lol PLEASE? Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
My, my, my Kynder. This is so real...I could HEAR it, not just read it. Even now, somewhere, on some street, this poem is being played out....and the results are always the same. A masterpiece, K. Hardrock |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Whew, even half asleep, I can feel that right through my bones. So cruel to mislead the youg ones lie that, And all we can do is support, rather than judge Now thats you and me and Hardrock and Spitfire that wrote abioout this subjest, It does bear discussing, I think. keep writing Sandra./ moonbeam |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Wow Kynder!! The raw truth here!! I can feel the cold and dampness of the street....Images of the thieves in the night, stealing the innocence..Excellent work!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
How very true ... I would really love to know the story behind this too! Cool poem! ~verve |
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