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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
~Before you Left~ I slowly look away I cant bear to meet your eyes You and me We used to be, so close Practically inseperable Two beings intertwined into one now we dance alone in our own little desolate corners iside this huge lonely world I really loved you I gave you my all Sometimes i heard it in your vioce you were drifting yet i wanted so bad to hold on I could never hurt you But did you really ever care? your words were made of sugar but your actions, like stones, beating me senseless It feels as if none of this is actually real, a cruel dream how could you have forgotten? the many promises you made to me now you act as im a waste of your precious time you never tried to make it work between us yet i miss you the way you danced the way you loved me those poems you wrote about us just beautiful... you made me smile you held me hand I miss your love but i cant bear to make my eyes meet yours so i merely look away i keep walking passing you by I look back only to realize that you've gone and i begin to cry. ~MiseRyDivine~~ All i want in life is to be happy It seems to me How messed up things can be Everytime i get ahead I fell more dead ~KoRn~~ |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Ouch, I hope this is not written on a real life experience. your words were made of sugar but your actions, like stones, beating me senseless. I love those two lines. Just awesome!!! Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
(sigh)....i really wish it wasn't thanx for ur reply...Xeonox |
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mustlove_mstleave New Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 8 |
Damn, painful feelings are always powerful just as it is in this poem.. Even when we are kept from being loved by ones we love, still we will crave to certain times when our hearts used to be filled..and hands occupied.. ...we cant deny how much we long to woeful pleasure! Great job... |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States |
Did my husband talk to you? Sounds like he wrote it...as we have drifted so far apart. Dee "It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Damn painful to think about, damn powerful to read. I hope you get over the pain soon. Be well Kethry. When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this poem does hurt, and i hope that your pain will soon subside...beautiful writing! |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I always wish I could find the words to take away the pain of heartbreak that you write about here. It hurts so much I know...Although sad, you did a wonderful job writing and expressing your emotions. Hope things are better very soon!! Take care The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
WOW! This is a reflection of my marriage. Why is it that so often, one loves with all their being, and the other not at all. There is nothing sadder than love that is abused. Linda |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Yes WOW is the word used here! I think we all have been through this at one time or another and yeah it hurts. You did n excellent job expressing the feelings of so many. GREAT work DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
oh my geese gosh...wasnt expecting such a huge reply....thank you so much...all of you are so wonderful and great and kind. much love to you all! MiSerYDivine~~ All i want in life is to be happy It seems to me How messed up things can be Everytime i get ahead I fell more dead ~KoRn~~ |
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