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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
You found me.. In sorry plight My constant pinings because One had gotten all the goodness I... All the appearance of it Anguish had infected my spirit I was groping blindly.. For a reprieve My eyes veiled By drooping lashes In a few scattered seconds Your every sentence of kindness Yielded a spoon.. Full of hope Just when.. I rendered myself lost You found me The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is lovely, deb. So hopeful! I could just picture it. If only everyone could be found just in time, at the latest!  PS I especially like the cut off I ... Really effective! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Your every sentence of kindness Yielded a spoon full of hope." Loved these lines...sometimes nice words from just the right person can help so much...James |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Deb..Such beauty...and such a message to us all. It takes so little to reach out...and when we do, we touch our own souls just a little. Love ya...Hardrock |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Perfect Deb, "a spoonful of hope" God do I ever live on those. Loved it. Catalinamoon |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~*sigh*,...oh wow. Deb, this is just so lovely. In every sense of the word. "In a few scattered seconds",...Ooh, Love the thought of that. Take care D1. *Peace. |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Deb~~Wonderfully hopeful poem!! Nicely written too! I can just picture a knight on a shining white steed....sigh... ~Sash~ |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
loved this message of hope..we all need someone to nurture us every now and then...so many still wait to be "found"... this is a very lovely poem! |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States |
I thank god everyday that a someone "found" me...I loved your poem...Dee "It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen |
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misscris Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 27Leawood, KS, USA |
Deb, Having been 'found' recently, I could relate to the beauty in the 'spoonfulls of hope' my finder dishes out each day. Eloquently put, misscris 'to be loved is to exceed the bounds of human joy...it is stealing fire from heaven. |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
Deb...I loved the hope in this one. So many wait to be "found", but I have learned that the best "finder" of me...has been ME. Linda |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
well all I can say is this was very very well done...and it's message came across to all ~~softly Maureen |
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