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Defining Love
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Defining Love |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Defining Love Thank you very much my dear for a message sent loud and clear. Looks like one of your days has arrived again for you to pause and say we can still be friends. I know you feel free to go ahead and tell me you love me still in between those sexual romps with a new friend you couldn't wait to touch and feel. Your definition of Love to me is lust and lust can only satisfy an urge and will always prove to be untrue. I'm fully aware I'll never receive real love from you. Yes, we drifted apart and were not close together as we should have been but why is it that this so called love of yours seems to come to an end each time a new opportunity for lust begins. So once again I listen unimpressed as I hear you say we can still be friends anyway. But could you possibly tell me the reason why I would want to stay in touch with an unfaithful woman I will never admire or trust always claiming she loves me and only loving her lust. Jameslee@June18,2000 [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 06-18-2000).] |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
It's simple my friend, you can't. a heartfelt read. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
One word says it all...."impossible!" This was a very good poem tho. It reminds me alot of myself and my situation. Oh well.... life goes on and on and on and on!  I do not love you for being perfect..... I love you for being perfect for me!! |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Wonderful poem....very expressive of your feelings...I've been there before with guys and there comes a point to where their presence completely disgusts me...now see...I hate men for a good reason. Joking...I don't hate them all. It's just a woman thing. But anyway....once again excellent poem!D.E. Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ "So what are we, helpless? Puppets? No, the big moments are gonna come...you can't help that. It's what you do afterwards that counts. That's when you find out who you really are. You'll see what I mean..." -Whistler *+Daughter of Darkness+* |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Another strong message in this one James. Your ability to express yourself with the flow of your pen, never ceases to amaze me. Marina |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i feel the point very clear and have been cheated on my self and know the hurt when you really love that person. great poem keep up the work. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Joel, Dark Kisses, Dark Enchantress, Marina, and Jeremiah for your wonderful responses. I appreciate your interest. Yes Jeremiah, disappointment lingers for a long time and trust vanishes for what seems like forever..James |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
You captured the feelings of loss and betrayal very well!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Nice job, JM. Some people just keep going back time after time...heaping more hurt on hurt. Hardrock |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
very well written you captured the hurt and betrayal well |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Justbleu, Hardrock, and StarrGazer for the wonderful remarks...James |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
oh wow james. this is so very powerful. very wise of you to see thru her guise. very poetic of you to describe such as this. i loved it. one more battle i have to fight thanks to some of these lieing & cheating women. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Your definition is spot on James!! Seems your lady friend's isn't!! Your words of anger are words of wisdom.. great work my friend. Isis I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you kynder and Isis I appreciate your wonderful comments..James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
James this is so pithy and to the point. Loved it but hope it's not real for you. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- Cole |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Kethrey for your nice comments...real situation but in my past and rapadly moving farther away each day...James |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
very nice poem, and there is a difference between love and lust. Love brings you home to the same person, love is a committment. Love makes you trust in all this we see that lust can make you loose. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Rosebud I appreciate your comments..James |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
very well stated! sharp and biting without being too insulting. ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Very nice poem, really spoke to me. I'm glad you put an end to this, those kind of relationships never improve. |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
hmmm...thought-provoking poem...makes me wonder about the people that so easily confuse lust with love and give up someone in their life that is kind and caring and responsible, etc. for a great "roll in the hay." Just what I like...a poem that will make me think for hours and hours...Nice job. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
James, I can only sigh when reading this one you write. How true it is lust N love so closely weaved yet often confused. This poem touches my <3 heart <3 Coco |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Dawn, LM, sonjes, and Coco for your wonderful responses...James |
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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
Wow....this one really got me especially the end....sad how many people let lust control their lives....and screw up their lives...... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nicely written James. One nice thing about getting older you except people for who they are not who you want them to be. Its called mellowing ha ha.. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
your message in this one James is loud and clear. Isn't it strange how some "Define love"?? You never cease to amaze me James. Hugs, Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I appreciate your comments ChibiDeathscythe, Victoria and Marina...James |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
I hope to never see.....good poem!! Very well put!!! Thank you! Click |
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