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The Letter |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
THE LETTER: I'm down on my knees Forced down by something I couldn't have predicted Emotion a seed Growing exponentially Bursting Exploding The earth that is me can no longer contain it Thirteen years I waited To hear from you the truth of my life and circumstances All the times debated Hurt, yet never hated Grown Alone Now granted just one more of hope's chances It's written, the letter My heart, my life, to you unknown yet mine Now it's better Though my eyes wetter I dared Now scared Respond and make a dying light shine I wish to return From whom I came Hold my letter And call my name. Sylvia Greybe 3/8/2000 |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Sylvia, this is extremely powerful..If I understand this as you write it, I hope you get the response you have long waited for and need. Heartfelt, powerful writing!!! I loved it!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Long time to wait to hear the answer Sylvia. Excellent poem. If this is you, let us know how it turn ok. Cat... |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Sylvia..yes, we must know about the letter. I can understand the anxiety...just waiting for that response. Excellent poem,btw. Hardrock |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Sylvia,if I'm reading this right I hope you find her and your heritage. Lovely poem Kethry Kethry. When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole. |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Lovely poem ... Really well-written! ~verve |
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