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Wind Spin |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA 
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Wind Spin I hang On the turn of your words, your letters, Each of them a swivel That allows me to spin With the winds of your love, Caught in the sunlight of your phrases, Casting kaliedoscopic colors across the walls Of my existence. When the clouds come And I know they will, Will you take away my bearings, like all the others, And just leave me Twisting in the wind? |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
marv, you never cease to amaze me. i am a leaf on the same tree, just letting the wind have its way with me. this is exceptional work, marv. very well done with few words. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
To the point, and boy did it make a point! Good work here...realizing I'm not such an interrogative person after all! Look forward to more! Jerm "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful Marv, different style, perfect of course. Love it. Love you |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
Dear Marv As always, my friend, your work astounds me. Such power and sadness in so few words. Boy oh boy can I relate. Feel with you man. Great work. Love Sylvia |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Marvin, the words you write are beyond description. I would babble if I tried to describe them in any way. But I am sure you will not be left spinning in the wind again  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
You are the enchanter Hardrock, adding that touch of sadness along with beautiful imagery...Loved this piece!! Lost for words... The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Marvin,...I love reading this, I love HEARING it. Reading it aloud just sounds so right. Wind Spin,...even the title says so much to me....you definately caught me in the whirl. Sheer talent. Take care H. *Peace. |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Amazing. Great imagery. Lost for words. Be well Kethry. When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Oh Hardrock, I must agree with everyone here. This was beautiful You have such a talent for poetry. I wish to write as that one day also.Thanx DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
I can only echo all that has been said before me. Beautifully written with so much said in so few words. Linda |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I have a feeling, Hardrock, that even if you felt yourself twisting in the wind, you would write a beautiful heart felt poem about it which would help to bring you peace. Wonderful poem! |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
you are gifted and this poem is beautiful...the words just climbed inside of me and nested there...and that is a very wonderful feeling....poetry like this is ALWAYS felt! |
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