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Dark Poetry #2

Death by writter's pen

DeathTrippy
Junior Member

since 2000-07-15

Posts 45
WY USA

0 posted 2000-08-03 01:04 AM

I hate my words
Despise writting
Why can't I write
I'm dieing
Near crying

I am no poet
Tragic thoughts
Why am I here
To die
Nothing more

Writting
Dark days
My story written
It is time
Now I die

Replace my pen
With a less mighty sword
A dagger to my heart
It is in
Bleeding me

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2000-08-03 01:07 AM

You always are the evil one. LOL. Great poem.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

poutprincess
Senior Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia

2 posted 2000-08-03 01:11 AM

a very fitting title! no matter how dark the source...bringing out your emotions through words will always let a small shimmer of light in...you are very talented..please keep gracing our pages.

mustlove_mstleave
New Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 8

3 posted 2000-08-03 02:30 AM

who knows..maybe at the very moment of dyin the truth of WHO REALLY WE ARE nakedly and cruely confronts us..
bur as for u i have no doubt, not even tiny seeds, that u are a talented poet

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