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A Quiet Voice Tonight
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A Quiet Voice Tonight |
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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
-A Quiet Voice Tonight- i know it's been rough, so let me be a quiet voice tonight reassuring our love, making it be just right the air was wild tonight, you could feel it in your bones the clouds seemed content to fight, about something that's still unknown the lightning in your eyes was all it seemed the wind blowing wildly flowing dreams and on this night the smell of change filled the air loss was everything, and everythin filled the air with one last kiss from you i started my adventure to where things are the way they used to be, not things that were i was forced to venture without my heart for you, and only you, had it every single part i went on my way and found it just the other day i know the way through my adventurous dream and it looks better than it seemed now that i have the heart, i can finally take flight but my friend, i know it's been rough so let me be a quiet voice tonight J.L. Koehler |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hi there,...let me just say that I read this sort of slooow, taking breaks between certain points,...and I loved it. I was floating in your words. Thank you. Wonderful. Be well CD. *Peace. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
A beautiful wish and a beautiful poem that I swam in for a while. Thanks. Good work  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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