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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Fleeting shadow used to be love door ajar remembrance of touch glimpse of passion reminiscence of happiness shadow gone door slammed passion disintegrated memories tainted love terminated |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
The sparseness of this poem is awesome, cat! I do hope this is not a reflection of your current state! ((hugs)) if it is!  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Cat,...this poem came hammering down on me. It's the only way I can come up with to describe to you what it felt like reading it. WoW. It's seems so final and desolate. I'm sorry. Awesome writing. Please be well Stylish One. *Peace. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Cat wow concise and powerful. "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Great poem! I really like your use of very small, and to the point wording. This really punches the reader! |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Cat... Ohh Darlin` Powerful indeed.. 27 words and what meaning. As always, great again! (-:  )LarBear |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Takes the reader right there where you want them to be, the message is loud, Excellent job again my friend!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is a great poem my friends i really enjoyed the read and i hope to see more from you real soon so please keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Strong, true and beautifully done. Love it. jwesley |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
May just be my testosterone getting the better of me, but that looks like an old-style bomb headin' north! LOL Oh, I liked your poem too!  [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 08-01-2000).] |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Whew!! Such finality...wrapped in such pain. Great job as usual, Cat. Hardrock |
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JohnDLeclare Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 43 |
Specially liked the powerful ending John D |
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