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The Stealth |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
This casual stranger Riding on pure instinct Can navigate through The streets of your heart.. Without changing lanes With a velvet cape of Pure confidence.. He could snap your desires Like a cold spring breeze Your screams of awareness Are silenced by.. His covert manipulations He stole a myriad of hearts That only he.. Could execute alone The Stealth The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
oooooooooo girl this is gooooood!!! i love the line..... without changing lanes... damn this is powerful!! excellent!! kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
woohoo, that is one for the record books. LOVE IT. Know that guy personally. Cat... |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Deb..This is from way down deep. Loved the imagery here...and how you strung it all together. Good show!! Hardrock |
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JohnDLeclare Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 43 |
Vivid images ! John D |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Right in the face,.....that's how this one hit me. Whoa! What a ride. Strong. Take care D1. *Peace. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Wowee-woW! This is so fantastic. Haven't we all met him? Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
powerful, direct, well done feeling poem! |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This is an interesting poem. Impressive use of metaphor and simile. |
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