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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA 
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who are you to imply that because I don't write of my pain-- I don't hurt. I ache so much from this despair my words are not there I'm mute in the grief of what I lost and the worst part is that it was not mine to have in the first place I have no place I can not cry--so how can I write if I write--I will cry if I cry--I don't think I will stop how could you do this to me then expect me to write of my grief, hurt, anger, pain for all to see especially you who are you to imply that because I don't write of my pain-- I don't hurt [This message has been edited by Lady Noggins (edited 07-31-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lady N, this is the first of yours I have read,very nice. Strong emotions. I know the feelings well. Email me if you would like to talk. catalinamoon / Sandra Practice can make anything perfect...even grief can become an art. Merrit Malloy |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
Written from a raw soul, M'Lady, yet exquisite.You wrote it well in the end, even if flowing saline solace to sting a recent wound. Wonderful job, Evan |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
ah sandra, thank you for your kind words. I can not begin to say the inferno that was sparked when two poet minds danced together in the flames of words. And the pain and despair when the fire was lost. I can still hardly write, right now I am posting recent/old words of mine. I hoping my words will come back to me. This was one of five that I wrote in an hour that day when he dared to tell me that he was writing out his pain and that because I couldn’t; this made us different. *sigh* The only way he will see these words is if he comes here, we post on another BB site, he was briefly here while our site was down, but he hasn’t posted here since its been back up. But, I think I have found a second home here. Looks like I’ll be posting in this forum, The Corner Pub, and CA. . .and I’m wandering around in this reply. evan, thank you for your acknowledgement of my words. Lady Nogs |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh Lady, please do stay and post here, I enjoyed your poem very much. I love to write, and have been in that place where I am so overwhelmed that I cannot get the words out...so I understand. Hope your doing ok...Warm wishes, Deborah1 The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Lady...I agree...do stay with us. Just write what you feel. This poem really says it all. Hardrock |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Deborah1 & Hardrock, thanks for your kinds words, I will most definitly be around with such a lovely welcome from everyone. Lady Nogs |
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