Dark Poetry #2 |
Logicality |
kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
Walking squares on a circle path Falling up the spiral stairs Untying a straight flat line Drunk off sobriety's grain Dancing to silent sounds Jumping over invisible Blockades Insanity abounds.................... *****kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
OH, good description, very powerful. Catalinamoon |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well SisBean being insane doe's have it's ups. i don't know about downs cause i've been insane for years and have had alot more fun than most people. enjoyed this read keep it up Sis. Love always Jay your little jumping Bean I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ooh Kynder,...this is so twisty and awesome. Yes!!! 'Tis Great in it's tangled weave. I love that. Superb title for this masterpiece. Be well K. *Peace. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Kynder..you do so well with this type writing. Real mind twister here. Loved it. Hardrock |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
The oppositions here are teriffic!!! Love your style!! Excellent writing!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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