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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
birds created from colored paper brought to life through the magic of your hands torn from the pages of library books my forbidden fate flies after "tell me sir- will you help me find the garden of forgiveness that i seek?" taken by the hand one i knew so well i tumble to my first death the birds that follow me pick out my eyes with their paper-cut beaks my second death to be betrayed by one I have loved so well to cry blood to find love with lost eyes is to not find love at all it is my eyes that make me beautiful my empty bleeding holes make me beautiful you can fold me ito my many parts like so much paper give me wings of printed words let me free to fly in the garden that i seek to die in the rain clinging wet to a tree bleeding the ink of your name |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Wren, beautiful words, beautiful images, beautiful writing, beautiful poetry. Perfect. Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Wren, Wonderful imagery... Great work. regards, sudhir |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Wren,...Ooh, may I please print this baby. Absolutely mind enticing poetry you've written. Mmm,...I ate every bit of it up. Truly grand. Be well W. *Peace. |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
quote: Amazing imagery . . . this took my breath away! Lady Nogs |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh Wren, this is amazing, images stunningly vivid, painfully real. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I agree with everyone, its all been said, but I will say too this was just awesome!!! Love your work!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Some great imagery in this poem! The concluding stanza is awesome! |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Thank you very much, all of you! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Wren...I agree with all. This is masterful work. Excellent. Hardrock |
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