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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida 
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If you were to peel me away Layer after layer, Down to the naked core, You would find only Scar tissue. For I was ripped out Long, long ago. *****kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh Kynder..this is remarkable in such a short verse. Speaks loudly at the reader, excellent work!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very to the point, and painful. I can relate. cat... Practice can make anything perfect...even grief can become an art. Merrit Malloy |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Some very powerful writing. Never give up hope, though. |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Kynder, huh... I have never thought of pain like that. What a small little poem that has tremendous heart!! LarBear |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well SISBean looks like you've been listening to red hot chili peppers alot. Just Joking with you. this is a great poem from a great poet and a dear Sister and Friend. Love you with all my heart and i'll do my best to rid you of your scars. Love Jaybean I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Definite purveyor of pain...but well written too. And even scar tissue is part of the healing process. We go on from there. Good read. jwesley |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Kynder...I know from whence thy come. Very real indeed. Great work. Hardrock |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Kynder,...this is so affective. It leaves me...umm, standing here taken aback a bit. *sigh* WoW!. Take care now. *Peace. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
True Kynder true! But further in/down beyond the scar tissue is a loving heart/soul just waiting/longing for love.. The scars will heal, the soul will mend and love will someday be yours again.. *hugs* Great descriptions here  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Though I do indeed hope so healing has occurred now! I really am intriguied by your writing.Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
ooo....i likes this! its really good! great job! Much love~ MiSeRyDivine~~ |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
This is so real. Why do I suddenly feel like an onion, peeling off layer upon layer. I have heard life is like an onion you peel it off layer by layer. Sometimes you cry. I hope you don't cry too often. Excellent poem. Kethry Kethry. When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
the support from each and every one of you never ceases to amaze me. i can only thank you for taking the time to read, and then share what it made you feel. i am almost to 500!!!!!!! yyyaaaahooooooo!!! i will never stop coming here, no matter how happy my life may become!!!! LOL love to all. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You made me think about that song by Red Hot Chili Peppers called Scar tissue. I believe we would all be unpleasant to look at if all the scars from our pain and sorrow stayed with us and healing didn't do its task...James |
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