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One Tear Follows
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One Tear Follows |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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One Tear Follows one tear then another each accepting the one above until the heaviness is too much to bear and they begin their flow with each tear comes a memory of a time of smiling eyes laughing lines and sensations uncontrolled a beginning to an end an end to a beginning the mind swirls searching for that right mix a balance of thoughts to bring back those smiles to bring back your taste to bring back the feel of you lips drying up from lack of your kisses eyes closing to all dreams never seen mind emptying of wants that never realize body forgetting the ache that once was one tear then another each accepting the one above until the heaviness is too much to bear and they continue their flow.... |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Very well done!! I don't cry often, hate to cry, usually can't stop the flow of tears once it starts, the flood gates open....I enjoyed this poem alot. The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
MMoonchild , Boy-O-Boy, I can feel your tears. A good way to express yourself, and document your emotional state. LarBear |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Deborah thank you...I wish I didn't have tears that often..but I am a bit overly sensitive to most things... and LarBear...if you can feel these then I guess my emotions were stronger today than I thought... softly thankingy ou both Maureen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Maureen, I know how those tears can join together to make a river. Beautifully expressed. Take care. Catalinamoon |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thanks catalina...just been a couple of those days...between that and the real rain.... ~~softly Maureen |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
ahhhh i am really starting to love your work, maureenie. i tend to create my own little names for people, sooooo hope you don't mind!! anyway... this is wonderful. i totally relate. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Maurine...simply beautiful. The poem, like your tears, flows into the river of my consciousness. Hardrock |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Wow, people hammer me for painful poetry! I see someone shares in my experiences too! This is great work! Though there is no set rhythm, this one hit home for me. Thank you for writing what I felt! Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
Wow! if that doesn't describe my last few days nothing does! Thanks for touching this unknown heart : ) |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
kynder no problem with the nickname and I will tell you why ..I am called Renee by my friends and family (renee as in reenie) my grandfather use to call me Maureenie and that is how I got the nickname..others on the net call me Maur (mostly Aussies)just don't call me Mo ...thank you for liking my work..I am just getting use to all the poets here and right now I am still spreading myself out to try and respond to a large variety but I am reading all.. ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Hardrock...that is such a beautiful thing to say would make a lovely poem The poem, like your tears, flows into the river of my consciousness. nice idea..hmmm river of consciousness I like ~~soft hugs Me |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
firejerm ...you get hammered?? ..oh my what is poetry if it isn't feelings, negative, positive and inbetween...there was no pattern to this as I had this happen yesterday and I let the tears and the words both flow... ~~soft smiles Maureen(I am a moody cancer...beware) |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
LOTR I do believe my days have become worse than yours....want to compare? just kidding thanks Maureen |
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