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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
It's nothing just a little tear I shed whenever you are near and you touch my soul It's just that I'm a little scared When you're close, I'm so aware that you make me whole. It's not that I don't care for you I care too much, but it's true that you don't care for me. As I look into your face I see premonitions of the place Where I will set you free. My love is deep my love is strong My love shall never do you wrong Love takes its bitter toll So it's nothing just a little tear I shed whenever you are near And you've touched my soul. Kethry. When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh Kethry,...such a difficult river to cross. I feel for you. That one little tear has reached this heart. Well written expression. Do take care. *Peace. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
this is so sweet and yet so forlorn ... lovely! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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FoxyGirl Junior Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 17 |
Thats a very sweet poem. Very touching. Keep up the great work. Hope to read more. Jenn |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh that little tear, streaming down our cheek, I can feel the emotions here. Excellent Job!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Kethry...beautiful sentiments. Very well said. Hardrock |
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