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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
I remember how it used to be, When life seemed worth living, How I used to always smile, I thought that would never end, When I dreamed, always of you Something in the way you talked, When you held me everything was safe, Now all I had has gone away, I dont know if you will ever come back, All I want is to go back, How it used to be when I wished, Why wish, there's nothing left to wish for "There is no always forever-just this-R.Smith broken glass never cuts the way it should-Gin |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Aww,...such a desperately empty cry. Forward is the only way to go. Wonderful work with this expression. Do take care G. *Peace. |
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mustlove_mstleave New Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 8 |
Touching. I like it, it reveals common desires and pains........but will there ever be time when we stop wishing??? |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I think we all wish for the thing we want the most..Then we do have to go forward, I agree. This was written very well!! Hope happiness finds you soon!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Now this one was good too. One thing though...... wishing is a good thing!!! I wish everyday for so many different things. Some I may get , some I may not. Oh well I shall keep wishing!  DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Gin...here's hoping you get all you wish for. Very nicely put. Hardrock |
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