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No Name.... just PMT
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No Name.... just PMT |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia 
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What can I say... PMT and Dr. Jeckyll and Mr. Hyde. First the birth and then the slap World deals out a lot of crap Picks the time and picks the place Then it shoves it in your face Drags you down and ties you tight Won't get through without a fight Draws you in then spits you quick Tries it's best to give you stick Stuff the world and all it's hurt Know you're just a sod of dirt. Sorry guys... hope you all feel ok after this...lol |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i read it and still feel great because all your doing is stateing facts and there nothing wrong with that its the learning to live with it thats hard. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
OUCH!!! The truth really does hurt sometimes doesn't it...nice work though...I liked it...I think!!! |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Oh but Linda we are so much more, your poem has a great ring of truth, but it's the fight that counts, for each breath we breathe. Love the poem kid. HHHHHHOOOOOOOWWWWWWWLLLLLLLing great review. Joel I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey...I like a good rant now and then... sometimes you just gotta... |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Feel better now?  Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Great big *Sigh*,....I do this often. Have things I need to get off my chest and boy,...watch out. haha...this poem held truth behind it...I hope that today you see a smile and a sun beam on your face. Really. Take care. *Peace. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Linda....I loved it....now I'm gonna go slap the h*** out of myself....just in case someone else in the world missed their turn. Great poem.....Hardrock |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
We all feel this way from time to time, and a good venting always helps. Good writing I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Just wanted to let you all know that I'm fine really. Thanks for the comments, they mean a lot. Linda M. |
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