Dark Poetry #2 |
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Suicide of Jen |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
The cold steel chilling her hands; Suicide, With shaking she barely stands, Inverting the revolver, Must be tried, Taking aim to resolve her Lasting pain so consuming, Suicide, Past this is no returning, Just the eternal dark bliss, Must be tried, She then gives the gun a kiss, Suicide. Gloom For a missing friend, to whom I think of still. |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Oh gloom I can so relate to your pain here for I too have lost a dear friend in this manner.I understood his pain. and what drove him to that decision even though it was wrong I still love him and miss him I have also written a poem for him. I'm so soory for your loss Bluebrdy |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Gloom...sighing..I am sorry for your loss...I never knew sorry I put a sad face here and it ended up looking mean..I will get that colon and semi colon thing down someday ~~soft hugs Maureen [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 07-29-2000).] |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
It's sad how many choose a permanent solution to a temporary problem. From my heart to yours, Professor. Hardrock |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
this was a very good poem i am very sorry for you loss, i hope you are o.k. --gin |
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