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Twisted Sick Lullaby
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Twisted Sick Lullaby |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
Slowly dragging my body to a land of the unborn Where maggots prance on corpses now putrid smelling My angel's suicide has brought my mind to a stand~still Voices distant heard whispering my name Merely for thier amusement My fear quickly awakens thier laughter abrubtly gets louder Trembling, shaking, running without looking back The insects after my sweet skin Attacking with great quantity Comsuming my precious flesh Then there was you You eased your way through leaves n thornz Rescuing me, safely palcing me down You seemed so nice, so at peace I was just a fool You stole from me What no other man shall ever Eating my life away Raping my soul to the core swallowing me up like an insect king You smile with satisfaction as i mourn in grief Millionz of needles stabbing, piercing my skin, into my spine my viens filling of your acid A vile look covers your eyes I scream and pull you down digging my nailz into your flesh Clenching my fists hard slowly outgrows nubs from behind Out they fall beautiful feathers wings of winter divinity protrude from her back My angel's suicide has brought my life to a stand~still I crave his touch, his kiss, his love He dances tonite alone, laughing Her angels suicide, such a tragic death. |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
very twisted, very sick, but very good... "swallowing me up like an insect king" just plain great...  EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
very twisted, very sick, but very good... "swallowing me up like an insect king" just plain great... EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Goodness, I scare easily...but you did a really good job!!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
This was really frightening and a hard, hard poem. I hope it's not reality based. Be well Kethry Kethry. When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
MD..this is REALLY dark. Nice imagery you used here. Nice play on words. Hardrock |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
really enjoyed the imagery, the play on words, the overall piece. jwesley |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
hello all...thankyou oh so very much...for responding to my poem. it was just written because it was something that was in my mind at the time...thanx again...oooo....people like my poem...yay! much love to you all! MiSeRyDivine~~ |
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