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Birth of an Immortal
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Birth of an Immortal |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
*This is the first of my Immortal Series poems...hope you like it: Celestial spirit of the night Gliding into her lover’s embrace A moment stolen, a sweet touch Then gone without a trace Sweet smile of love she offers him Her visage too beautiful to bear But he cannot deny her He longs to have her there Tender words disarm him As he smiles at her in delight This ethereal lover seeking Fulfillment from the night She amazes him with her vigor Her lust has no earthly restraint She saps his very mortality Until he realizes it’s too late The last night she seeks him out She tells him of her wicked plan She needed to produce a child From the seed of an earthly man Immortal was the name she used Woman doomed to forever lust Bound by a curse from ancient witch Never to die and join the dust She let him touch the belly That held his unborn child In a moment he saw her Half human, an Immortal wild In his mind’s eye, she appeared; So breathlessly magnificent Dark green eyes, flaming hair Her form meant for man’s bedevilment His woman child would live on Forever, it has been decreed And he a lowly mortal Had provided the fertile seed His lover turned to leave him A smile of cunning in her eyes He knew his death was required For this mating compromise The child, a girl, was born anon As beautiful as had been foretold And from the time of her birth She upheld the Immortal code |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
And this poem shall be immortal as well. Incredible.. |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Wow... Great poem... I look forward to the next one.. LarBear |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~PDV,...definately looking forward to the others in tow of this! Very creatively written...extremely mentally entertaining! Be well P. *Peace. |
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Jester59701 Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 154 |
Awesome Sharon! Very interesting concept! Those immortals sound hot! To die for! Keep them coming! Jester ':~) |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
PDV..I so love this!! and do look forward for the others to come!!! Thanks for a wonderful read!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for you kind comments. These 'immortal' poems seem to write themselves. I am think I should send one to Boris Vallejo and ask if he wants to collaborate!  |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Divine De Vine! Deepak |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
PdV..I love the entire Immortal series. I'm hooked. Hardrock |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful work here, PdV! |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Incredible. I love this series. Keep writing. Kethry Kethry. as soon as you feel too old to do a thing. Do it! |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
This concept is so similar to some prose work I have going. I love the style here. Your language is timeless. "And one day...the whole stinking world would be theirs..." -- Velvet Goldmine (Todd Haynes, Oscar Wilde and, unofficially, David Bowie) |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
*sigh* Elegant, eloquent, powerful, beautiful. Like an Immortal herself, ah suppose. She said burn ... together. |
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