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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
we can misunderstand ]we can inside the best we can see it through smacked in the face where are the real poets taken for what could be enlightened within the speak tell us, once again tell us, about death in your eyes we were here we handed the times **** you and your chimes why do we write why dom we deal why do we even come close we will, and we know we will taste, we will smell, we have already eaten the lies, but we will never misplace the eyes I don't know you, but you could swear upon me within the last distance I have learned not to be |
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misscris Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 27Leawood, KS, USA |
Wonderfully colorful language...very engaging, and intrigueing. I like how you assume your reader is intelligent...otherwise they would miss the whole point. Keep writing. Take care. misscris "God is a comic, playing to an audience who is afraid to laugh." |
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