Dark Poetry #2 |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Looking at the pain, this too will pass, it is fading fast. Lost are times, both good and bad, losing it makes me sad. If I could keep, the ones most dear, remember times with you near. Ruined good, with out regret, I will lose even yet. Keep the faith, that I feel, taking the time to heal. Never quit, I can't go on, knowing that you are gone. Take the chance, one more try, loving you until I die! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Very creative in your writing here. WoW, twisty and touching all in the same. Sad. Be well C. *Peace. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
the torture of going on in spite of it all... you express it exquisitely. thank you. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Pushing past the pain, to continue on with our lives...you expressed this very nicely. Sometimes its like taking those baby steps, but we keep going!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Another excellent piece, Click. Really well expressed! Keep them coming! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
so sad, yet so beautiful.. well done, Click. |
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