Dark Poetry #2 |
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Without Love |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
I try so hard to be brave and strong Yet whatever I do seems to be wrong The love that I need, just isn't there I've no one to cherish, no one to care I want so much to be loved, to be needed Yet warnings, so clear, I let go unheeded My future looks empty...I'm filled with fear To be all alone year after year The love that I feel just will not die So alone I will be and alone I will cry I'll keep the memories of times that we had All of the good, yes, even the bad The children are mine, at least for awhile They're good for me now sometimes I can smile Maybe with time, the pain will be less The hurt will subside, I only can guess But the sadness I feel will always be there As I go on alone with no one to share My ups and my downs, the good and the bad Never knowing the love I wished that I'd had Linda Tiuch I wish I had this place years ago...I felt so totally alone...and thought, of course, that I was the only one who ever felt this way. I have come to learn that we are never alone; that love comes in many guises. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Linda,...what a heart heavy poem you have written....and so well I might add. Again,...your words make the reader 'feel'. Oh and thank you for the little note at the end....otherwise I would have given you a great big lecture on the love that surrounds us all. Take care and I'm personally glad that you have joined our little 'family'. Be well LT. *Peace. |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
L Tiuch, Wow, heart felt emotions beyond imagination. Dark Passions is here to share your feelings just like this. I cant think of a single better way to release emotions than poems with such great feelings put into them. Welcome to our family. LarBear |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Very lovely Linda...welcome to Passions! Just by visiting you can be assured that you are not alone! Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Linda, I felt the same way when I found Dark Passions, such caring people here, welcome!!! Your poem was excellent, reminded me of many things I have felt myself at different times in my life. Thank you for sharing, hope to see more as always!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Linda - If this were a book submission ![]() [This message has been edited by BSC (edited 07-25-2000).] |
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