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I will remember.....will you?
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I will remember.....will you? |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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So many things have happened So much time has gone by But I will always remember Till the day I die Of the memories you gave me The many smiles at night The kisses in the morning With each ray of light I will always remember The memories so true But the question is.. Will you?? The hugs in the evening Watching you lay in bed "But good things must end.." Isnt that what they have always said? From the warm touches To the gentle smile I wanted it all to last... At least for awhile I will always remember The memories so true But the question is... Will you?? Memories do fade As life seems to move away But you carry my heart With each new day Keeping it strong And knowing I do care Your face is in my mind With each single stare I will always remember The memories so true But the question is... Will you?? I do not love you for being perfect..... I love you for being perfect for me!! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~All those sweet memories are the ones to hold on to. Lovely poem,...thank you for sharing. Take care. *Peace. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
So beautiful, so heartfelt, god this hits my heart, to be remembered in the good times and the longing for the memories. God. Here is a rose for you kid.  Joel I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Very beatuful poem I enjoyed it greatly hang on to your memories Blue |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hold on to your memmories..Well said and it was a very sweet tribute to the person..If its me I'll always do remember.. Sincerely A_L |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
memories are meant to be remembered and if someone can't i guess they never really cared. great poem and i love the question. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I love the way you wrote this poem...the way you described all of your special memories and then ask the question...3 times...Will You? I have wondered many times when other think about me is it happy thoughts or sad thoughts. I think you know the answer to this question...this is why so many relationships end...one cares so much more than the other...at least in my experiences... James |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Great Poem Dark_kisses! Very true about how someone would feel towards an end of an relationship. Does this poem deal with that person you said you cared for?? Keep writing. |
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Bustem57 Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 98 |
Once in a while someone comes along and touches your life and for those memories they will be forever cherished. Great poem Dark Kisses!!!! |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
Great words!! So melancholy...I do hope they remember...you deserve that... |
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hunter Junior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 22lex,ky |
I was grealy impressed with your words.I have wanted to ask them myself before.and also to ask if it was the good times...the bad times or all the times that was remembered for we need to remember them all.hunter |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
well the topic is close to my heart... cause i will always remember... i never forget somehow... this one touched me for so many reasons... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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SlyOne Junior Member
since 2000-06-24
Posts 16 |
Thank you for sharing your poem....Its was beautiful....I to have those memories....Sometimes we have to let go in order to move forward......Maybe one day we both can..... |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
He'll remember.....YOU may not know it, but he'll remember....if not tomorrow, then the next day...but he'll always remember. It's what we do with those memories that shapes our lives. A really good poem here......it brought back bittersweet memories for me, because I remember. Hardrock |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WOW!!! Have you ever shown him any of your poems? This is totally depressing me for i feel the same way in my own lamented situation. keep up the good work I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Not all good things have to come to an end I guess. I've been in this predicament, and it ended as a matter of fact. However I have faith, I guess  Again, WELL done."Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
hun *hugs* i love this. reminds me of my poem that i wrote if i leave here tomarrow. will they remember??? who knows. as for me i am lost as well. i hope one day i will know. *hugs* great peice of work hun love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Nick_UK Junior Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 10 |
Hi! This is really great... One of your best. |
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Nick_UK Junior Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 10 |
Hi! This is really great... One of your best. |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Another beauty from the past.. It seems as though these questions lose the rawness and become more melancholic with time.. has that happened? I hope so.. Great work. Sheila |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
This was beautiful. I think that if someone forgets something that was supposed to be important to them then they must never have cared. Memories are something that we look back on. ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
This is really touching.... Excellent writing and expression of your emotions. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I'll remember too! Yes the memories past are always cherished....well.....the good ones at least! thanks for sharing!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Thank you all for your comments. This one was posted awhile back. Thanks for bringing it back up, it meant alot  DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Awe i really luved this poem soo sweet good job LOVE ELMO <3 |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
This is a great poe,. When i was laying in bed i was thinking of someone and wondering this very same question...will he remember? i guess we all ask that question at some point. best wishez ~angie Don't fear failure so much that you refuse to try new things. The saddest summary of a life contains three descriptions: could have, might have, and should have. --Louis Boone |
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