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Casonova
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since 2000-04-29
Posts 35
Mays Landing

0 posted 2000-06-19 01:19 AM



MY DREAM MATE.


We all have our dream mate
    we want to meet someday
hoping that somehow fate
    will take us that way
It could be a Movie star
    or some great celebrity
Or someone really bizare
    If that tickles your fantasy
But mine was far better
   than anyone of these
for she was brought on a feather
   by imagination's soft breeze
she had a perfect Smile
   that no artist could portray
and no writer could compile
   the words she would say
Her Body was perfect
   in each and every way
You could not find a single defect
   if you looked all day
She had long and flowing hair
   That could never be caught
And there is no one who could campare
    Or so I thought

For until I met you
    She was absolutley flawless
But she's now number two
    for my dream you now posess
her smile looks like a frown
    when it's next to yours
and your hair looks like a crown
   when it's compared to hers
Her body seems all deformed
   When I Think of you
For you seem so uniformed
   in everything you do
So You are now my dream mate
   In each and every way
And I am begging fate
    to make you came my way
And Uhm.. If it's not to late
   Fate Please don't delay


Desire and determination, can bring any goal within reach.

© Copyright 2000 Daniel R Cuellar - All Rights Reserved
Casonova
Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 35
Mays Landing
1 posted 2000-06-19 01:23 AM


Sorry all, I havn't been here for awhile, I Went to my sisters wedding, And I come back to find This a total diffrent place.. i think it's awsome, I'm sure you agree. thanks again, and now that I'm back I have to get busy replying, And voting too.. lol

                     Me !  
                    Casonova

Desire and determination, can bring any goal within reach.

SEA
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with you
2 posted 2000-06-19 01:35 AM


Casonova~ this is sweet and fun to read!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


bsquirrel
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Posts 7855

3 posted 2000-06-19 01:57 AM


I loved how you sort of made fun of the writer's obsession -- from being THE ONE to "eh, number two." Thanks for the smile, and your wit.

Mike

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
4 posted 2000-06-19 12:24 PM


Number 1 to number 2!!  Liked what you did here!! Rather cute too I might add!! Cool!!

Bridgette  


"Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." -Unknown


X Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
5 posted 2000-06-19 07:10 PM


fickle souls that we are!
cute!
~Heather

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2000-06-19 08:42 PM


This was tender and sweet Casonova ... lovely and fun sentiments throughout, well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2000-06-20 01:50 AM


very tender and touching!  
Lost Dreamer
Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
8 posted 2000-06-21 05:02 AM


This is good I enjoyed.
Casonova
Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 35
Mays Landing
9 posted 2000-06-24 08:32 PM


Sorry I havn't been back on in a while, I just miss so much when I'm goe.. well thanks all for responding, I appreciate it.. take care now.

                            Casonova.


Desire and determination, can bring any goal within reach.

epoet
Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291
grand rapid,MI, usa
10 posted 2000-07-11 09:15 PM


really cute poem about obsession.  loved the idea of going from number one to number two.  keep up the wit and spirits.

P. J. Kotrch
carpe diem
A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love


jamesjiao
Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268
Backwaters of Avalon
11 posted 2000-07-12 05:21 AM


Wow Casa.. It's so good, we all love our dreams, 'cause in our dreams, we see our perfect soul mates especially someone you once know. Hope your lovely dreams come true one day.. Casa

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.



Heather Miller
Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
12 posted 2000-07-30 12:34 PM


Oh my, I really enjoyed this.  
hugs,
Heather

Without the experiance of love where would we be?We would have no wonderful memories to cherish.With love it brings hurt with hurt brings bittersweet

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