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Casonova Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 35Mays Landing |
MY DREAM MATE. We all have our dream mate we want to meet someday hoping that somehow fate will take us that way It could be a Movie star or some great celebrity Or someone really bizare If that tickles your fantasy But mine was far better than anyone of these for she was brought on a feather by imagination's soft breeze she had a perfect Smile that no artist could portray and no writer could compile the words she would say Her Body was perfect in each and every way You could not find a single defect if you looked all day She had long and flowing hair That could never be caught And there is no one who could campare Or so I thought For until I met you She was absolutley flawless But she's now number two for my dream you now posess her smile looks like a frown when it's next to yours and your hair looks like a crown when it's compared to hers Her body seems all deformed When I Think of you For you seem so uniformed in everything you do So You are now my dream mate In each and every way And I am begging fate to make you came my way And Uhm.. If it's not to late Fate Please don't delay Desire and determination, can bring any goal within reach. |
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Casonova Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 35Mays Landing |
Sorry all, I havn't been here for awhile, I Went to my sisters wedding, And I come back to find This a total diffrent place.. i think it's awsome, I'm sure you agree. thanks again, and now that I'm back I have to get busy replying, And voting too.. lol Me ! Casonova Desire and determination, can bring any goal within reach. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Casonova~ this is sweet and fun to read! -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I loved how you sort of made fun of the writer's obsession -- from being THE ONE to "eh, number two." Thanks for the smile, and your wit. Mike |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Number 1 to number 2!! Liked what you did here!! Rather cute too I might add!! Cool!! Bridgette "Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." -Unknown |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
fickle souls that we are! cute! ~Heather |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was tender and sweet Casonova ... lovely and fun sentiments throughout, well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
very tender and touching! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is good I enjoyed. |
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Casonova Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 35Mays Landing |
Sorry I havn't been back on in a while, I just miss so much when I'm goe.. well thanks all for responding, I appreciate it.. take care now. Casonova. Desire and determination, can bring any goal within reach. |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
really cute poem about obsession. loved the idea of going from number one to number two. keep up the wit and spirits. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Wow Casa.. It's so good, we all love our dreams, 'cause in our dreams, we see our perfect soul mates especially someone you once know. Hope your lovely dreams come true one day.. Casa - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Oh my, I really enjoyed this. hugs, Heather Without the experiance of love where would we be?We would have no wonderful memories to cherish.With love it brings hurt with hurt brings bittersweet |
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