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azblond
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The Steamy Desert

0 posted 2000-07-17 01:06 AM





If I had words to say to change your mind
Would they mean anything at all
Words are so simple to a heart that’s blind
It’s like bringing a net after the fall

If I were to capture on film the image
Of how foolish you now seem to be
Would it be enough to bring you home
Back to your place beside me?

If I could play a melody so bitter yet sweet
Would it encompass you with truth you can hear
Or is it too late for any of these things
Alone, I now shed a tear
  



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1 posted 2000-07-17 02:02 AM


AZBlond~
Enjoyed the wistful longing in this one.
~*Marge*~


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tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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2 posted 2000-07-17 04:09 AM


beautifully sad
*HUG*
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-07-17 10:16 PM


I like this one too. It's sad and wistful.  
azblond
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The Steamy Desert
4 posted 2000-07-17 11:40 PM


Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts.  Often simple phrases say a heart full of feeling.

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
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INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
5 posted 2000-07-17 11:47 PM


well written poem...
sad but beautiful words..


If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao


Heather Miller
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6 posted 2000-07-30 12:13 PM


very sad.
hugs,
Heather

Without the experiance of love where would we be?We would have no wonderful memories to cherish.With love it brings hurt with hurt brings bittersweet

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
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High Springs, Florida
7 posted 2000-07-30 03:39 PM


sensing much longing for that which is lost..     

sadly wonderful..

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran

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