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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
each and every time are you just a dream that enters my mind a sweetness so sublime when i'm rushing to and fro you sit in the background of the very front row my lips have spoken for you when you could not and listened as you talked in the darkness when I dream are you there love... are you there beneath the rain your a shadow in my thoughts i've touched you, though i have not and my finger tips have loved you each and every time James Parker Haley ©2000 [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 06-19-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ I really like this, my favorite part- "are you there beneath the rain your a shadow in my thoughts I've touched you, though I have not and my finger tips have loved you each and every time" *SIGH*  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
( I forgot to vote so I'm doing it now! -SEA) |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Very well done. My favorite phrase in the poem is "beneath the rain," and I'm not even sure why. Definitely deserves a place in the book. Mike |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
your a shadow in my thoughts i've touched you, though i have not and my finger tips have loved you each and every time. ------------------ you got me with this one ... but then you already had me  this is so perfect p-man... its so YOU ... jm |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I enjoyed this, seems like you daydream a lot!! Nice!! Bridgette "Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." -Unknown |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
My personal fave. Corinne |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
ok....caught....was gonna say this was my fav too...can I have 2 favorites |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
I lahk'd dis one muchly sir! ~H |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
You got my vote! ( like you didn't know! ) Marina |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
SEA, thank you.... bsquirrel, thank you, I find a warm summer rain comforting and brings comforting thoughts. Janet, your always so sweet, thanks. Justbleu, I guess I do, thanks. Corinne, thank you sweet poet. Corazone, I think so, hey get yours in here theres a few I want to vote on. X Angel, thank you very much. Marina, thank you, I knew... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this one is nice ...two thumbs up |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hi there me Parker! Just a little bit late as usual---but I made it...and so glad I did...this is lovely, now pull that curtain for me will ya? Gotta vote now... |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Oooooh! What caught my attention most of all in this was: "when i'm rushing to and fro you sit in the background of the very front row" Great lines Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A beautiful weave from you Parker, this flowed like a dream~ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Walt, thanks for that. serenity, thank you glad you liked. Eric Williams, thanks very much. Butterflies_dont_cry, thank you, and dreams of butterflies flow in my head... Parker |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
loved it james... chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I love this poem! so ethereal and romantic! got my vote. Ellie |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
CMGrimm, thank you very much. ellie LeJeune, thank you for the lovely comment. Parker |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Parker~ 'and my finger tips have loved you each and every time' Does it for me ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marge, thank you, I kind of wonder if anybody really knows what I mean by that line. Parker |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
*bump* to the top.... and as for fingertips....am I correct in my first assumption that you are speaking of an online relationship?  ~Heather PPS I STILL love this poem! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Heather, very perceptive, I'd better keep and eye on you.... lol Parker |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Parker, This was wonderful, so much enjoyed. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
OhhMiGosh Parker.... This is lovely poetry and I am kicking myself (I don't know how I am doing it) for not reading this beautiful piece earlier... Regards, sudhir |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
James, Trying to get caught up on some reading and I'm so glad I caught this one It's wonderful Liz |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
well written... enjoyed. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Cerenity, thank you I was inspired. Sudhir Iyer, you have such nice comments, thank you. Liz, thank you for replying, always nice to see your nice comments. Mike, thank you. Parker |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I'm beginnig to realize that those fingertips create excellent poetic work. "each and every time" take care.....ethome |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
this is my second poem of yours I have read and I must say I'm in love with your poetic style!! wow, this was wonderful "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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michellemckee Junior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 49Tucson, AZ |
Parker, Again you have left my heart with an ache! Life is not a spectator Sport! Dance like no one's watching. Love like it's never going to hurt. |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
I really don't kow how you do it but every one of your poems I've read sends my heart in flight. BREATHLESS AGAIN LITL, Heather and of course I voted With God all things are possible. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
ethome, martini, michelle, and Heather... thank you very much for your responses. Sometimes a person can touch you across cyber-space to inspire the heart. Parker |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Yes indeed!!! This is simply wonderful. Bonnie |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ooohh..shiver...sigh..WOW...that just felt great all over.. love this, can you tell?? more more!! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Another great one! Voted |
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