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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
In my heart there's a big cluttered attic, Holding treasures of every kind, Hiding precious memories, That are never too hard to find. Sometimes they get covered with dust, Or forgotten inside an old chest, Perhaps they've been buried for many years, But they always survive time's test. When I take the rusty, bent skeleton key And unlock that huge, aged door, The family and friends of yesterday, Come back into my life once more. They help clear the lacy cobwebs, And polish the tarnished brass, Wiping away the layers of dirt, From the cloudy looking glass. The dressmakers form in the corner, Comes to life in the blink of an eye, As moths filter out of the pockets, Of a jacket from days gone by. It may not appeal to many, This place where I reminisce, But to me it's a old-time paradise, Going back to those days that I miss. |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
BSC...This gets my vote. You said... ~It may not appeal to many, This place where I reminisce, But to me it's a old-time paradise, Going back to those days that I miss~ It is the same place that I reminisce too! Thanks for bringing back the memories!! Great writing! MagnoliaBlue < !signature--> Caribbean Island Property(PARADISE) FOR SALE.Investors wanted to start World Class Resort and Marina.No Risk or Blue Sky. joonz@mindspring.com [This message has been edited by MagnoliaBlue (edited 06-26-2000).] |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
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Bonnie, this is a beautiful poem! You have my vote! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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monte Junior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 33 |
You must have just cleaned your attic and it took you back to yesterday. Guess I should clean mine, I wonder if similar memories would come rushing back. Very nice |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Magnolia, Glad to hear you like going back too. Thanks. LoveBug, Thank you. Monte, It's amazing what comes back when cleaning the attic. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi BSC, This was very nice, I have a place like this and it is a wonderful place to go, thank you for sharing. Cerenity |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
I love old memories, dusty attics, odd treasures of eras past. Nice one ~Heather |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah..memories....I don't have an attic...would like to though! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Bonnie this just flowed like old memories Great writing! |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Cerenity, Heather, PdV & Rebecca, Thanks so much for your kind replies, they are all truly appreciated. Bonnie |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Now that's a poem loved it Rex my night table drawer is similar to what you've described |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
Memories are made of this. Beautiful poem. Gossamerwings |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this is so wonderful..i love the idea of the "attic"! and memories are fun dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
very nice Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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