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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
There is something about a night, Beneath a tempest net, As candles light the path, To secret inspirations. The pen remains a veracious weapon, Against an onslaught of sleepless words. Breathing wisteria laden air, I imagine languid purple blooms, Affixed delicately on patient vines. Every flower bows its head, Respecting the ardor of the journey. Swayed by the wind, They shiver as if stifling giggles. Passion is on the march again. |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very nice Hugs, Heather Without the experiance of love where would we be?We would have no wonderful memories to cherish.With love it brings hurt with hurt brings bittersweet |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful imagery. I love wisteria! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
This is a wonderful piece to read I liked this alot Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
I love your use of verbs and the metaphors they create A captivating piece, deserves a vote . - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Temptress, Very much loved this, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Temptress~ So lovely. 'Breathing wisteria laden air, I imagine languid purple blooms,' Easy to see why 'wisteria' would inspire the muses to muster ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Temptress Great imagery and style. Very enjoyable. fh |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nicely written. Enjoyed muchly. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Loved this poem! Liz |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Love It I do too((((((((Voted))))) Jon |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Thanks very much everyone. Its refreshing to know that a rewrite has done me some good for once. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I still want to know where I can get that "Wisteria" smell in a can!! Just wonderful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very nice dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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