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since 1999-06-19
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0 posted 2000-07-25 10:42 PM

                Why do you weep in solitude?
                What sorrow does your tears contain,
                As you withdraw in quietude,
                To hide within your wall of pain?

                Wing mockingbird unto the skies,
                Adrift upon life's soothing breeze,
                Leave behind, pain's woeful cries,
                And glory in life's harmonies.

                Soft as spring's winds, you comfort me,
                As I traverse, adversity,
                Allowing me within to see,
                Inner peace, tranquility.

                As you suffer, so suffer I,
                Upon your wings, we seek the sky.

© Copyright 2000 Mike - All Rights Reserved
Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

1 posted 2000-07-25 11:28 PM

This is as high as the clouds!
You have my vote.

[This message has been edited by insect (edited 07-26-2000).]

Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
2 posted 2000-07-25 11:30 PM

Mike, Simply beautiful, loved this.  Bonnie

since 2000-04-12
Posts 268
Backwaters of Avalon
3 posted 2000-07-25 11:30 PM

I like your style man.

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.

Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
4 posted 2000-07-26 03:07 AM

lovely poem...very well written...
loved the quietude...well done< !signature-->

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

[This message has been edited by AVANTI (edited 07-26-2000).]

Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263

5 posted 2000-07-26 10:36 AM

Seeking the sky... so tenderly inspirational. Beautiful, my friend.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Flower Power
Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 29
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2000-07-26 03:32 PM

Hi There,

This is a beautiful poem.  "As you suffer, so suffer I" -- I love that's so true! You have my vote because you've really touched my heart with this poem.

Stephanie Lafleur.  

Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
7 posted 2000-07-26 04:34 PM

This poem soars really well...very well done!
enjoyed the read very much......

take care.........ethome..

Junior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 49
Tucson, AZ
8 posted 2000-07-26 04:52 PM

Wonderful poem Mike. It really shows how deeply you can care for some one. To suffer with a friend is to truly love them without reservation. You have my vote!

Dance like no one's watching.
Love like it's never going to hurt.
If it does hurt, shoot em! <Grin>

Heather Miller
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
9 posted 2000-07-26 05:19 PM

Very very beautiful. You seem to have a heart of gold. You got my vote, I'm sold.....
To be loved like that would be heaven.

With God all things are possible.

X Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
10 posted 2000-07-26 11:57 PM

ohhh this evoked a very big real time out loud sigh from me.
Very nice!


Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

11 posted 2000-07-27 09:30 PM

Beautifully done, Mike!  


Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
12 posted 2000-07-28 04:35 PM

Mike--another beautiful love filled poem from your talented muse.
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