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It's All I Have to Give. . . |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
It's all I have to give This heart with which I live A love pure, honest, and true Is all I have to offer you So what shall it be love? Take my heart and soar above? Or are you afraid to know The depth of love I show? Now love, yours is the choice Open your ears, hear my voice This heart with which I live It's all I have to give -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW Sven, all you have to give, you have so much to give!! Beautiful! you have my vote. My grief lies onward and my joy behind (Shakespeare) |
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Novacaine For The Soul Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 122New Orleans |
dear sven, it's all any of us really have to give when you get down to the truth of it... i hope that your beloved is willing to accept the beautiful gift of your loving poet's heart... sincerely, a sad tomato you're such a beautiful freak... i wish there were more just like you... |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
"Why do you love me so?" she asks, question in her voice. "Oh I love you, simply because you are you", was his tender reply. Wonderful ~Heather |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Sven~ Beautiful and heart felt poem... I am always amazed by the depth of your poetry. Well done my friend! "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sven, who says they are not beating a path to your door? LOL...see, I'm fifth in line... |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Ahh, Sven you have such a romantic heart and you're a talented poet at that! This has my vote Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
AHHH SVEN-GATOR... so many women so little time J/K perfect poem to represent you... jm |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This poem truly shows the "King of Romance" at his finest. Perfect for the Passions book. Marina It is blessing to have wings for your words, and passion to flow from pen. Marina Crossley |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ And ..... it's more than enough ! Lovely sentiments, my romantic friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Great poem Sven All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
luvitluvitluvitluvit....luvit chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
A very honest, very eloquent plea. Well done Sven Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Yes indeedy this shows you as we all know and love you Sven, and is a must for the book!! I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful Sven....I am sure it is more than enough my friend. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ Never do you fail to make me sigh..this is breathtakingly beautiful Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Christopher J Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94 |
Love is the ultimate gift...this poem is wonderful..i want it!!! what a beautiful poem in so few words.. |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
If only all people could be both the givers and recievers of this kind of love. Little tick in the voting box. Linda M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
simply wonderful. so beautiful. |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Sven- So short but so heartfelt, much like most of my stuff. I LOVE THIS ONE! Congrads my friend!! -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I love this one Hope to see it in print Liz |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I like this one it's gentle and sweet Coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 07-01-2000).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
There;s a Word for this piece, Sven VOTED! regards |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven, This is a beauty I love it. It would look awesome in print, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
What more could love ask for? A beautiful poem. |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!! That's all anyone can offer is their true loving heart. Great work...... LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
well written poem... great work with such simple true words If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
This is lovely and so romantic! Gossamerwings ;) |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Sven such a gesture of love, the willingness to give the whole heart. Very well done. Juls |
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Flower Power Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 29Ottawa, Ontario, Canada |
Sven, A beautiful love poem -- I feel like sending it to someone right now.....anyway, you have my vote. Love, Stephanie Lafleur |
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michellemckee Junior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 49Tucson, AZ |
Sven, Applause! Simply spoken yet deeply felt. Another vote well placed. Life is not a spectator Sport! Dance like no one's watching. Love like it's never going to hurt. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Sven, I seem to have missed this wonderful poem in voices. I shall correct that. Its trully from the heart, this one.... voted. Parker |
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