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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Come with me where souls reside Where tears are shed and feelings hide Where fairies dance and goblins laugh Come on down this starry path Where peace now sits on golden sand Come with me to passion land The silence here just brims with love The electric words come from above Dressed in joy and long sweet sighs Magic forms before your eyes Words of hope sprawl from your hand When you’re with me in passion land Come and hear the hawks’ shrill cry Where black cats live and dragons fly Where smiling faces wink at you The clouds are white the sky is Blue Come and view the harbour grand Atop the hill in passion land See how laughter rends the air When sparkling verses gather there You can pour out sorrow welcome hope And if you’re on that slippery slope Come where kindred’s understand Come with me to passion land Jon Mewett |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Cool poem!!  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW Jon in my mind and my soul I'm there...thanks for that  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You've described it well, Jon! Beautifully done! Denise |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Perhaps there needs to be a Passions Land Book...to stand beside Voices on the Web... NEAT! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I got to tell you Jon...that is one great work of poetry. I'm so sorry I have'nt dropped in on you before this...these boards are so busy that I just try my best to spread the comments around....but I have to say that is excellent....you got my click... take care ..ethome.. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nice poem. I liked very much. |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
*sigh...I'll be right there* This is so beautifully romantic! Gossamerwings ;) |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
very well written... simply charming last verse well done... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Another excellent poem Jon. Passion land - a wonderful reminder for those who have been and a great invitation for those who have not. Good job!! |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
What a lovely description of this little corner of the world. *click* Simply beautiful. Bonnie |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
I'm stuck in Passion Land Don't wanna leave either  Very nice poem LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Well.......I'm kinda OVER WHELMED. with your comments.......  .ThanksJon |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Well.......I'm kinda OVER WHELMED. with your comments....... .ThanksJon |
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