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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Go Deeper Barcelona was in your eyes gleaming dreaming beaming eyes shy unashamed hungering eyes that had seen so few tears eyes brown & insatiable eyes wide & questioning eyes raw & erotic eyes that promised sex without touching and conquered me gently blanketing my nakedness eyes that wrapped their light like legs around me beckoning go deeper... Barcelona beyond pupils and irises beautiful windows to one sensuous soul By Todd-Michael Phillips |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very nice. LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Todd, gorgeous work. Very heart felt. Thanks for sharing, Juls |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Todd, welcome to Passions. I've sent you a message regarding the number of posts you've made today. Thanks!  |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Heather: I have really appreciated your comments! Juliet_2u: Once again, you've made my day! Poet Divine: Thanks for the nice e-mail, keep up the good work! |
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Tallulah Junior Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 28 |
It's a shame they have to limit post (Although I understand why it is necessary) when I read your work I want MORE, MORE, MORE!!! This one is my personal favorite of all you have submitted! |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Well, that is nice to hear Tallulah, I have submitted maybe 10 poems all together and will only be posting a few more in all! I love this forum and am glad that we have such an outlet available to us to express ourselves and to appreciate the work of others and to make friends. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
VERY DEEP... good work... |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Thanks Avanti: It means more when it is expressed by poets I admire and look up to myself!!! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Todd - Don't be limiting your total number of posts - Just stagger them more - You'll get more attention, and Ceres will breathe easier...  This poem is certainly indicative of a real talent - Do continue to treat us to more of your good stuff....  |
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Tiziano Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 14 |
Good work. You really came accross with your feelings and sensations. Tiziano |
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Geoffrey Sonnen Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 142Reading, PA USA |
Sounds like Passion to me Todd. Your writing was as seductive as your subject matter. Peace, Geoff |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Nan: What a nice Response, thank you for taking the time! Tiziano: Thanks for the appreciation! Geoff: Peace to you too my friend! [This message has been edited by Toddles (edited 07-26-2000).] |
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michellemckee Junior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 49Tucson, AZ |
Can we delete this post as I screwed up!!! Thanks! [This message has been edited by michellemckee (edited 07-26-2000).] |
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michellemckee Junior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 49Tucson, AZ |
Very enticing, makes one want to be the object of such passion and desire. You can close your eyes and feel the emotion emanating from this poem. Thank you! < !signature--> Dance like no one's watching. Love like it's never going to hurt. If it does hurt, shoot em! [This message has been edited by michellemckee (edited 07-26-2000).] |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Michelle: Merci Beaucoup!!! |
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