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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~~ The Song a Caged Bird Sings ~~ Release these wings so I may fly among the Eagles in the sky where air is clear and big jets roar with winded wings skyward i'll soar to distant places i dream to see easily taken there on wings set free behold my beauty from flight of wings and hear the music a free bird sings with feathered wings spread toward heavenly space showing the splender of nature's grace so release me now from this prison of wire and behold the majesty of my winged desire sunward i'll climb through clouds surround to a sea of tranquility where freedom's found I'll chase the wind dance through halls of air and reveal my form while hovering there upward i'll climb through an endless blue where only lark and eagle have flew and in the silence of the fading day i'll bid you farewell as i fly away ~~~~~~~~~~ by Danny Holloway |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This works... Nice, Danny...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I remember this gem of a poem... wonderful writing and presentation Danny wondeful imagery as well... you better be care-ful you keep posting these works of art and someone might think your a poet  (some of us will expect you to do it more often) HINT HINT love this one my BEH... NOW post my most fav... or must I BEG LOL later gator BEG you can say baby baby can I hold you tonite maybe if I said the right words at the right time you'd be mine baby can I hold you tonite Tracy C |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
And what a beautiful song of freedom it is.  The imagery, expression and presentation is perfect, this has my voteTake care, Melissa Honeybee |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This will be a beautiful addition to the book! May you always be free, my friend. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written... Enjoyed. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Danny, this is excellent!! Loved it...  |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Love the pictures your pen painted with this one. Beautiful. Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DannyH~ Totally lovely ... content and display. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautifully done, Danny! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Danny~ Lovely imagery that you have displayed in this extremely beautiful piece. ~~~~~Fly free little bird~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~Free~~~~~~~~~~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Uplifting. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
I cannot stand it I'm opening the cage door Be FREE little bird...... Up and up you will soar....... I REALLY liked this! Vote is in ......Linda M. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful sentiments Danny ... makes me wish I too had wings! Wonderful poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Danny* This is beautiful!! I do believe I saw you lift off with this one....heaven bound to be sure! |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Fly high Danny Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Enjoyed the poem, but stop ripping off Maya Angelou titles (sort of). Mike |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Ok, this one got past me some how! Great to read this again Danny! Flows so beautifuly! I so much enjoy this piece, again and again! Got my vote!!! Of course, this piece DID inspire me to write one of my own! ~Sheri |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
where air is clear and big jets roar with winded wings skyward i'll soar That rocks! Love the entire stanza! |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
very weel wtitten poem reading you after long great work If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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