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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2000-07-23 02:38 PM


            Condensed

Paintings of singular call.
Harangue, hang and brood my wall.
Points of paint induced to meld
Produced while my breath was held.

Brought to a myopic bed.
Mental gold turned pigment lead.
Colors brought to fires bright
Dimensions of hyper sight.

Imprisoned phantoms caught in draw.
Brushed and fixed in pigment store.
Caught and held in final goal
Gems implanted by my soul.

To me they are my total cry
Dramatic as a Van Gogh sky.
Reinforced in poets rhyme.
Memories of my loves and time.

Begging to tell, each soul of call
By ghosts that hang upon the wall.


© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
1 posted 2000-07-23 02:53 PM


and a treasured wall it surely is ... I know I treasure mine
very well written Seymour
sparks many memories

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2000-07-23 04:39 PM


"Begging to tell, each soul of call
By ghosts that hang upon the wall."

Wonderfully written Seymour!

Vote is in.

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
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3 posted 2000-07-23 05:53 PM


"To me they are my total cry
Dramatic as a Van Gogh sky.
Reinforced in poets rhyme.
Memories of my loves and time."

Oh, so true ... just beautiful Seymour! Picture perfect!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
4 posted 2000-07-23 06:12 PM


Oh yes!!!!....Just beautiful.  Bonnie
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2000-07-23 06:37 PM


Rex,
Glad it touched a memory, thanks.

ethome,
Thank you for the vote.

Kit,
Beautiful comment, thank you.

Bonnie,
Thank you for the oh yes and vote.

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
6 posted 2000-07-23 07:04 PM


I remember seeing some of your paintings on the wall when we saw the photos of you and Balladeer, Elizabeth and Pepper. You have an extraordinary talent!   Voting!
tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
7 posted 2000-07-23 08:42 PM


Sy~
Wonderful writings...just lovely  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
8 posted 2000-07-23 10:38 PM


Poet deVine,
Thank you so much.

Tracie,
Thank you for the wonderful and the vote.

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
9 posted 2000-07-24 01:35 AM


Perhaps some day you'll explain each painting
This is a superb poem and should be in the book
Liz

AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
10 posted 2000-07-24 06:11 AM


very well written...
good work


If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao


Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
11 posted 2000-07-24 08:09 AM


Elizabeth,
Perhaps some day. Sy

Avanti,
Thank you for the vote.

Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

12 posted 2000-07-25 11:20 PM


well written as always...  add a vote.
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
13 posted 2000-07-26 08:02 AM


Mike,
Thank you for the read and vote.

Geoffrey Sonnen
Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 142
Reading, PA USA
14 posted 2000-07-26 01:24 PM


Unique and absorbing.I Got a little lost in there. Good usage of words. I Love word-play!

Geoff


Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
15 posted 2000-07-26 09:22 PM


Geoffery,
Thanks for the vote.

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