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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Condensed Paintings of singular call. Harangue, hang and brood my wall. Points of paint induced to meld Produced while my breath was held. Brought to a myopic bed. Mental gold turned pigment lead. Colors brought to fires bright Dimensions of hyper sight. Imprisoned phantoms caught in draw. Brushed and fixed in pigment store. Caught and held in final goal Gems implanted by my soul. To me they are my total cry Dramatic as a Van Gogh sky. Reinforced in poets rhyme. Memories of my loves and time. Begging to tell, each soul of call By ghosts that hang upon the wall. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
and a treasured wall it surely is ... I know I treasure mine very well written Seymour sparks many memories |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"Begging to tell, each soul of call By ghosts that hang upon the wall." Wonderfully written Seymour! Vote is in. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"To me they are my total cry Dramatic as a Van Gogh sky. Reinforced in poets rhyme. Memories of my loves and time." Oh, so true ... just beautiful Seymour! Picture perfect! Best wishes, /Kit |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh yes!!!!....Just beautiful. Bonnie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rex, Glad it touched a memory, thanks. ethome, Thank you for the vote. Kit, Beautiful comment, thank you. Bonnie, Thank you for the oh yes and vote. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I remember seeing some of your paintings on the wall when we saw the photos of you and Balladeer, Elizabeth and Pepper. You have an extraordinary talent! Voting! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sy~ Wonderful writings...just lovely Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Poet deVine, Thank you so much. Tracie, Thank you for the wonderful and the vote. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Perhaps some day you'll explain each painting This is a superb poem and should be in the book Liz |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
very well written... good work If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Perhaps some day. Sy Avanti, Thank you for the vote. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
well written as always... add a vote. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mike, Thank you for the read and vote. |
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Geoffrey Sonnen Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 142Reading, PA USA |
Unique and absorbing.I Got a little lost in there. Good usage of words. I Love word-play! Geoff |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Geoffery, Thanks for the vote. |
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