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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
As I sit in the darkening shadows Watching the water move toward the shore, I await the great painter's arrival, To enrich and refresh me once more. The sky above is His canvas. The sun and the clouds are His tools. The pinks and the reds and the oranges, Are only a few of God's jewels. The glow of the sun warms my being. The "picture" is painted with ease. I long to have it forever, But it's gone...as if on a breeze. The blackness of what once was canvas, Glitters, now, with diamonds so bright. Could anything else bring such beauty, As the sunset God paints before night? [This message has been edited by L Tiuch (edited 07-18-2000).] |
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh LT - Is there anything more beautiful than a quiet sunset on the water's edge??? You have brushed wonderful images with your poets pen. Bonnie |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh it's so true there is nothing like the beauty of that great artist. You did an excellent job depicting the scene with beautiful words......Well done!! |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Very well done. This does paint a beautiful scene. Thanks, Pete |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Good choice for the book! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I love it! Sunsets are God's art. Thank you for writing this and choosing it for the book. :0) Joy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LTiuch~ This is absolutely beautiful. So greatly enjoyed by this lover of colors of the sunset palette. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
great imaginary...well written If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
Thank you for the encouraging words. They are much appreciated. Linda |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Beautiful, AWSOME, Lovely, What a wonderful way to see God. You made God's Beauty shine in this one. It got my vote!!!!! LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
On this miserable rainy day, I just wanted to read this beauty again. Bonnie |
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