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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- i speak in written word; my lips, no sound may utter-- though in my silence i may be found, my soul in mortal mutter. you may fail to hear me if you close your eyes-- you must look beyond the sounds and become mesmerized. silence from my lips; my heart believes in time-- the time it takes to form the words in the straightest line. deep beneath the brightest smile, and underneath the tear is a story or an explanation i wait for you to hear. so hear me with your eyes, hear my written line; in my silence my words were aging-- as the finest tasting wine. --dgvarner [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 07-16-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Well stated, dg! Denise |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
This is so.. good, there isn't a word to describe just how good. Fantastique, is the closest I come to describing it I suppose. But it still seems that it's not praise enough. You know I love this right? |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks denise! its just pure truth marsha: i'm glad you liked this one..its always been one of my favorites of mine dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- one of my favorites too. sorry i missed it here for so long. and, yes, definitely 'pure truth'. luv, tricks "I have read your words, and within them I have found your heart. -vlraynes |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
OOPS! forgot to vote. my bad. -tricks |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
OOPS! ...thanks for the vote tricks! glad to offer up your favorites..heehee (this is one of my favorites too--of my own..) dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
forgive me..*meek is me* but i must bump my own here..NOT VOTING ON MY OWN! lol just bumping it up in hopes..that someone will want to read it!! dg.. "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
this is beautiful, and softly powerful |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
glad you bumped it Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
dg ... I just gave you a vote ... and I wish I could give this one several ... I really enjoyed this poem you do have a talent |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
corazon: thank you so much for picking this up and taking the time to read and respond!! jamie: thanks for not minding that i bumped it myself!! and thanks for responding rex: greatly appreciate your kind reply ..and vote!! dg < !signature--> "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 08-08-2000).] |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
dg, this is so so beautiful. Well done my friend. My vote is definitely in. Talk with you soon, Juls |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
youve got my vote as well! i enjoyed the sentiment in this....was lovely. ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
dgvarner, well, great sentiment, lovely piece, gets my vote easily. Although I had a little trouble with line 10. It said lips, so I was looking at your pic, and got lost in a daze, cause it said.... and become mesmerized. So I was and now, so I wondering how they taste with wine. I must be drunk with lips..... Well great poem... and very red. So I vote for the poem or the lips or both Parker |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i loved the flow of this it was great |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
juls: thanks for reading! and for your kind words talk to you soon too pout: hey there! we makin up--no cat fight?? LOL thanks so much for reading!! parker: ooh baby..if the wine touches your lips first, i'm sure it will taste great on mine cowboy... thanks for getting lost, uh..mesmerized in my poem..or my lips..or both! LOL..thanks for reading!! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hey there wayout thanks for reading while i was posting another reply! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey, dgvarner the rest have said it all and I think it's excellent......click.. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
cool thank you for your wonderful reply ethome! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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