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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand 
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Baby Moonlight, Filters through the curtains, Kissing her bedspread. Loving hands, Smooth a wrinkle from her sheets, Caress her tiny face. Her eyes are closed, A smile plays on her lips. She sleeps in silence, A tiny porcelain doll, Lying with her teddy bears. Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhh, this is sooooo sweet, Lynne!  Denise |
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Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
This is so perfect, a beautiful poem, expressing so clearly the sleeping baby. |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
It really was a sweet and memorable image. Thanks, Pete |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thank you Denise, Beverly and Pete! ^^ (I've posted this one in "The Corner Pub" but I wanted to submit it for the book... ^^) Luv, Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Yu Lan, This is so wonderful I must share it with my daughters thank you so much for it. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
A beautiful portrait painted, Yu Lan...I love this...and I used to watch mine sleep too...now they watch me sleep, lol...touching...I like. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thank you Cerenity and Serenity!! ^_^ Much love, Lynne |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
brings back pictures stored in my mind, of when my baby was so little....she's 2 now! and thinks shes such a big girl..i sure do miss that baby sleeping... great writing! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
yep, now just add some big dark eyes for when they are supposed to be sleeping AND letting you sleep, but instead they want to play .....no really great poem [This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 08-07-2000).] |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
wow....I love this one...please lets see more of your work... chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thank you so much, all of you!! ^_^ dg, Corazon and Chris.. ^_^ hehe, you are so kind! Love, Lynne |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
A perfect scene! I have had a few (a lot) of these moments and you penned it perfectly. marcy |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thank you Marcy! ^_^ Love.. -Lynne |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
wonderful images Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thank you Jamie! ^_^ Much love, -Lynne |
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Tiziano Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 14 |
A real life photograph of innocence seen through the eyes of a parent? Lovely. Tiziano |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thank you Tiziano! ^_^ Hehe, no, not a parent yet.. *_^ (I'm 15.. ^^) but it would be nice to watch.. I think.. Just my own picture here.. of a li'l porcelain doll.. hehe.. ^_^Thanks.. Love, -Lynne [This message has been edited by Yu Lan (edited 08-11-2000).] |
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