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Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
Magic Never did believe in magic It wasn't for the likes of me Cheap tricks with smoke and mirrors Speedy hand deceives the eye No such thing as magic Sadly, I breathe a sigh Could there be a little magic Whispered in the words of song Running through my life I stumble You took my hand and helped me rise Could there be a little magic Shining softly in your eyes Maybe I believe in magic Could it be there for me Painting my heart and life with rainbows Spining starlight through my dreams Maybe there's some special magic Maybe it's not only dreams Truly I believe in magic Nerver saw it there before Can't imagine life and love without it Magic, magic everywhere Yes there's really magic It fills me spills me everywhere [This message has been edited by Beverley (edited 07-11-2000).] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Very Lovely first post ... you show a great talent with this one welcome to Passions Beverley Rex |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Welcome to Passions. Well done! MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
If you believe in magical miracles....so do I. Lovely poem. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Beverley~ Welcome to Passion's. A lovely, lilting entrance. I know you'll enjoy your stay. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Welcome to Passions, Beverley! Darling Poem -- yes, there is magic. ~netswan |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Oh congratulations Beverly.. many ppl try to write poetry about love, but rarely succeed, as it is such a hard thing to describe.. barely is it a THING.. this is beautiful.. not what I was expecting when I found it, but u took my breath away with your writing. ^_^ Welcome to Passions.. Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I believe in magic too, and I loved this! Kathleen |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Welcome to Passions! Lovely poem! I wanted to let you know this forum is for book submissions. If you'd like to submit this for that please go into your post and click on the edit icon. Then check the box (under your name and password) that says would you like to submit your poem for the book? Welcome aboard |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
beverly...welcome to passions good work...well written... well i believe in magic too If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I found your first poem, Beverly! Simply magical! Please check your email for a special welcome! I think you should go into the edit function too and make this a book selection! Denise p.s. you have a little typo in the first line....belive should be believe. [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 07-11-2000).] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Just came back to vote |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ah-ha! i found it miss beverley! i love this! its wonderful..simply irresistably wonderful... love is ever-changing, and magical.. dg "i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Truly magical Beverley...well done on a most delightful read Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
Tracie yes this decribed the moment, magic lives. Dee you found it! I know you said you liked it, but I know you're only saying that. As I said not bad but doesn't hold a candle to the 'real' poets here. Love you all every single one, in a land of giants this human is only a tiny one. |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very lovely way to look at love. I enjoyed it much... LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
bumpin' this to the top--cause i like it dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
well written... lovely poem If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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