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Beverley
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 97
England

0 posted 2000-07-09 12:04 PM


Magic

Never did believe in magic
It wasn't for the likes of me
Cheap tricks with smoke and mirrors
Speedy hand deceives the eye
No such thing as magic
Sadly, I breathe a sigh

Could there be a little magic
Whispered in the words of song
Running through my life I stumble
You took my hand and helped me rise
Could there be a little magic
Shining softly in your eyes

Maybe I believe in magic
Could it be there for me
Painting my heart and life with rainbows
Spining starlight through my dreams
Maybe there's some special magic
Maybe it's not only dreams

Truly I believe in magic
Nerver saw it there before
Can't imagine life and love without it
Magic, magic everywhere
Yes there's really magic
It fills me spills me everywhere



[This message has been edited by Beverley (edited 07-11-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Beverley G M Searle - All Rights Reserved
Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
1 posted 2000-07-09 12:21 PM


Very Lovely first post ... you show a great talent with this one

welcome to Passions Beverley

Rex

MagnoliaBlue
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since 2000-05-12
Posts 367

2 posted 2000-07-09 12:27 PM


Welcome to Passions.
Well done!    

MagnoliaBlue


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I love you!
Your Lady June~

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
3 posted 2000-07-09 12:28 PM


If you believe in magical miracles....so do I.
Lovely poem.


Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


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4 posted 2000-07-09 01:30 PM


Beverley~
Welcome to Passion's.
A lovely, lilting entrance.
I know you'll enjoy your stay.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
5 posted 2000-07-09 09:59 PM


Welcome to Passions, Beverley!
Darling Poem -- yes, there is magic.

~netswan

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
6 posted 2000-07-10 07:38 AM


Oh congratulations Beverly.. many ppl try to write poetry about love, but rarely succeed, as it is such a hard thing to describe.. barely is it a THING.. this is beautiful.. not what I was expecting when I found it, but u took my breath away with your writing. ^_^
Welcome to Passions..



Lynne

"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu



Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

7 posted 2000-07-10 09:43 PM


I believe in magic too, and I loved this!

Kathleen

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
8 posted 2000-07-10 10:20 PM


Welcome to Passions!
Lovely poem!  I wanted to let you know this forum is for book submissions. If you'd like to submit this for that please go into your post and click on the edit icon. Then check the box (under your name and password) that says would you like to submit your poem for the book?  

Welcome aboard  

AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
9 posted 2000-07-10 11:11 PM


beverly...welcome to passions
good work...well written...
well i believe in magic too

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao


Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

10 posted 2000-07-10 11:58 PM


I found your first poem, Beverly! Simply magical! Please check your email for a special welcome! I think you should go into the edit function too and make this a book selection!

Denise

p.s. you have a little typo in the first line....belive should be believe.

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 07-11-2000).]

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
11 posted 2000-07-18 01:32 AM


Just came back to vote

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
12 posted 2000-07-21 12:57 PM


ah-ha!  i found it miss beverley!  i love this!  its wonderful..simply irresistably wonderful...

love is ever-changing, and magical..  

dg


"i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
13 posted 2000-07-21 03:07 AM


Truly magical Beverley...well done on a most delightful read    
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Beverley
Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97
England
14 posted 2000-07-21 05:15 AM


Tracie yes this decribed the moment, magic lives.  

Dee you found it! I know you said you liked it, but I know you're only saying that. As I said not bad but doesn't hold a candle to the 'real' poets here. Love you all every single one, in a land of giants this human is only a tiny one.  

Heather Miller
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
15 posted 2000-07-21 01:34 PM


Very lovely way to look at love. I enjoyed it much...
LITL,
Heather


With God all things are possible.

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
16 posted 2000-08-06 12:07 PM


bumpin' this to the top--cause i like it  

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
17 posted 2000-08-06 04:51 AM


well written...
lovely poem

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao


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