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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 2000-07-03 07:22 PM


She danced for him
with her eyes
every part of her swayed
his eyes met hers with every sigh

She danced for him
with her smiles
every part of her swayed
his smiles joining hers cross the miles

She danced for him
with her lips
every part of her swayed
he joining her with his hips

She danced for him
with her soul
every part of her swayed
his became whole

She danced for him
with her heart
every part of her swayed
his love tearing them apart

She danced for him
with her tears
every part of her still
but the magic of love lingers here



© Copyright 2000 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2000-07-03 08:30 PM


RG~ this is beautiful!   Why aren't you putting these in to get voted on?!? AHHHH!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



RainbowGirl
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2 posted 2000-07-03 08:54 PM


Cause like the brunette that I am, I didn't realise I had to do something special but now I'm going to...LOL i.e. click the right button...*sigh*

HUSG

Thanks for liking it, I deleted it when I first posted it ..

Poet deVine
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3 posted 2000-07-03 09:25 PM


I like it very much!! Voting here.    
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4 posted 2000-07-03 09:29 PM


RG - Beautiful, simply beautiful.  Bonnie
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5 posted 2000-07-03 09:37 PM


RainbowGirl~
You fairly dance with delight !
Love ya', gal !
~*Marge*~


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6 posted 2000-07-03 10:15 PM


YES!! thank you for putting this up for voting! ********VOTE********** here's mine   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



buttercup411
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7 posted 2000-07-03 10:29 PM


i like your style of writting....great poem..
love,
buttercup

buttercup411
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8 posted 2000-07-03 10:29 PM


i like your style of writting....great poem..
love,
buttercup

buttercup411
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9 posted 2000-07-03 10:30 PM


i like your style of writting....great poem..
love,
buttercup

Denise
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10 posted 2000-07-05 08:42 PM


This is lovely, Cindy!  

Denise

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11 posted 2000-07-06 05:04 PM


voting   love these cindy....they make for sighs tears and smiles  
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12 posted 2000-07-06 06:57 PM


Hey Cindy, I loved this! you have my vote hon  

Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"

Nan
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13 posted 2000-07-06 08:44 PM


I don't know why you deleted it - This is good, RG..
Poertree
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14 posted 2000-07-07 11:19 AM


ditto Maree .. Cindy .. glad you kept your finger away from the delete button  

.. yeah but at least you're not an Essex blonde   .. then you really would be in trouble ..lol

P

[This message has been edited by Poertree (edited 07-07-2000).]

X Angel
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15 posted 2000-07-08 05:03 PM


yep ya gotta love it

~H

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16 posted 2000-07-15 03:00 PM


Hi RainbowGirl,

Im glad I did not miss this beauty, enjoyed muches.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

RainbowGirl
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17 posted 2000-07-17 12:16 PM


With green eyes sparkling RG says thank you kindly..

HUGS all

WhtDove
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18 posted 2000-07-17 10:24 PM


I too don't know why you deleted this. It's wonderful    HUGS
AVANTI
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19 posted 2000-07-17 11:55 PM


charming...
I can picture her dancing...
well written

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao


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20 posted 2000-08-06 12:24 PM


playing catch up in here today....
glad i didnt miss a chance to vote for this
take care
jm

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