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bad little dog
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since 2000-07-08
Posts 38
city pound

0 posted 2000-07-09 12:46 PM





Daybreak  with  a  Lonesome  Dove
~^~~^~~^~


Mistral  breaths  from  sparkling  dew
arise   to  greet  the  dawn
As  daylight  strolls  across  my  face
chasing  chills
the  night  has  drawn
~^~
The  prayers  of  natures'  gentle  yawn
rise  up  to  heavens'  praise
As  morning  doves  sing  out  their  song
with  a  gentle
loving  grace
~^~
A  breath  of  pristine  mountain  air
prolongs  the  twinkle  of  an  eye
Expands  the  savoured  time  we  share
within  our  touch
we  trade  a  sigh
~^~
We  slowly  rise  to  greet  the  day
our  apparel  strewn  around
A  white  dove  rested  on  my  sleeve
when  my  shirt
I  finally  found
~^~
Racoons  had  scattered
ripped  and  tore
my  pants  to  score  some  gum
My  shirt  and  jockeys
the  dove  had  spattered
with  hopes  ...   her  gift
repaid  the  fun
~^~~^~~^~


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Ruff Bow Wow
Grrrrrrrrrrr




[This message has been edited by bad little dog (edited 07-10-2000).]

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Sven
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1 posted 2000-07-09 02:42 AM


Excellent!!

You have obviously been inspired recently. . . nothing like the great outdoors for that!!!

Superb. . .

-----------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Nan
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
2 posted 2000-07-09 09:58 AM


bad little dog's been hanging out in the great outdoors, I see..
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2000-07-09 12:32 PM


BadLittleDog~
Hmmmmmm !
There's something familiar about this puppy !
Welcome to the 'doghouse' !
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
4 posted 2000-07-09 01:03 PM


very nice

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
5 posted 2000-07-09 10:08 PM


This is great! LOL White Doves don't spatter do they  

If they scored some gum, that would be a site to see now wouldn't it? LOL

Irie
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
6 posted 2000-07-10 12:55 PM


Wow, what a piece you have written here with a little twist of humor
at the end! I enjoyed this BadLittleDog!  

Welcome to Passions and I'll be looking for more!


~Sheri

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
7 posted 2000-07-10 04:48 AM


Wonderful poem here BadlittleDog...I loved it
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


bad little dog
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since 2000-07-08
Posts 38
city pound
8 posted 2000-07-10 03:08 PM


Thankyou kind people

kind people ... hummm
... not one doggy treat ...
... Ruff! ...


Ruff Bow Wow
Grrrrrrrrrrr

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

9 posted 2000-07-10 11:17 PM


hmmmm......the style and doggie seem very familiar! This is absolutely delightful! Now how come I can't vote for it, huh?

Denise

WhtDove
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Illinois
10 posted 2000-07-11 12:29 PM


Oh I had to come back and vote for this  
Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
11 posted 2000-07-11 07:56 AM


Looks so familiar... nice poem by the way...

regards, sudhir


Denise
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12 posted 2000-07-11 08:29 PM


Thank you!  

Denise

bad little dog
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since 2000-07-08
Posts 38
city pound
13 posted 2000-07-18 01:46 AM


Ok who called the dog catcher ?
may the clan leave their gratitude on your lawn
... ruff ...


Ruff Bow Wow
Grrrrrrrrrrr

jamesjiao
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since 2000-04-12
Posts 268
Backwaters of Avalon
14 posted 2000-07-18 02:17 AM


A fair description of our canine friends.. good work, baddie.. gotta anymore of these?

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.



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