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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
The moonlight comes tonight, And with it comes thoughts of you, Let's call the moonlight our own, A few nights a month just we two. All dreams realised, All troubles will lessen, Moonlit strolls hand in hand, Our gifts from heaven. Talking, sharing, our anam cara, Moments for lovers alone, No work, no anger, no pressure, Our true sanctuary, our home. Sharing our dreams and fantasies, Sharing our secrets and realities, Singing together, both in voice and in soul, Watching moon beams dance through the trees. The nightsky gives way to colours of pink, orange and blue, Dawn is just approaching, yet all too soon, We cherish these last moments together, Already anticipating the next rise of the moon. With great physical pain our clasped hands they part, Already our bodies, too far apart, The beginnings of a void already taking hold, Right inside our longing hearts. But cara it won't be long, Until the moon rises again and the heaven's play our song, I'll be waiting here on the Cape, Come back soon to where your heart belongs... I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Lisa this is WONDERFUL writing... such beautiful imagery with the moon and sky and such sweet emotions of love. very lovely poem to reflect a lovley poet with a kind soul, take care jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Janet Marie knew you'd love this one I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Lisa what wonderful imagery you have portrayed...this is soo beautiful Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Isis: I love the flow and beauty of this romantic poem. Truly lovely. Ellie |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks everyone I love the yearning feel to this one I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I love the idea of sharing moonlight with someone! "Our Moonlight"...very nice. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Isis~ It shines as lovely as the moon itself. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
This is so lovely, great imagery..."a moonlit stroll hand in hand" just full terrific pictures. Bonnie |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
ISIS This is a lovely verse... simply charming flow... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
very nice... enjoyed muchly. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Isis, you know that I have always liked this one. . . just wonderful my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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